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Name: Rapid Reader (Signed) · Date: 12/22/06 21:39 · For: Lily's POV
Oh! Now I get it! Good description.


Name: Rapid Reader (Signed) · Date: 12/22/06 20:12 · For: Lily's POV
I luv this poem! My favorite part(s) is/are:
As I lay here tonight,

I wonder.

My feelings for you,

So foggy.

So unreal.


As I lay here tonight,

A terrifying thought arises.

With each breath of your name,

That escapes my lips.

My heart races,

My flaming head swims.


You’re so arrogant,

So full of yourself.

Yet your hazel eyes intrigue me.
Although I don't get wat u mean by "My flaming head swims."
Good job!
Rapid Reader ;-)


Author's Response: --Although I don't get wat u mean by "My flaming head swims."-- Lily's hair is red. :)


Name: Rapid Reader (Signed) · Date: 12/22/06 16:04 · For: James's POV
Good one!


Name: potions_perfection (Signed) · Date: 08/25/06 19:06 · For: Lily's POV
Both are wondeful! -applaudes-

Author's Response: Thank You! Again...


Name: potions_perfection (Signed) · Date: 08/25/06 19:06 · For: Lily's POV
Both are wondeful! -applaudes-

Author's Response: Thank You!


Name: RupertsPheonix (Signed) · Date: 08/25/06 16:57 · For: Lily's POV
Good chapter/installment. I have on suggestion, though; maybe you could delete the comma after "fit." Just a grammar suggestion. But anyways, good job!! =) --RP

Author's Response: Okay.


Name: two_magic_charms (Signed) · Date: 08/24/06 9:22 · For: Lily's POV
your really good...

Author's Response: Thank you!


Name: two_magic_charms (Signed) · Date: 08/24/06 9:21 · For: James's POV
sweet!

Author's Response: Yay!


Name: padfootnflawks (Signed) · Date: 08/18/06 18:12 · For: James's POV
I liked it!! You should right a L/J fic!! Your poems are really good!

Author's Response: I'm trying to write a H/G missing scene fic for a while now, but a dear friend of mine had passed away about a month ago, and it's sort of hard to write for a while. But thanks to my second first reviewer! Sort of really the sixteenth...


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