Reviewer: Rapid Reader
Date: 12/22/06 21:39
Chapter: Lily's POV

Oh! Now I get it! Good description.

Reviewer: Rapid Reader
Date: 12/22/06 20:12
Chapter: Lily's POV

I luv this poem! My favorite part(s) is/are:
As I lay here tonight,

I wonder.

My feelings for you,

So foggy.

So unreal.


As I lay here tonight,

A terrifying thought arises.

With each breath of your name,

That escapes my lips.

My heart races,

My flaming head swims.


Youre so arrogant,

So full of yourself.

Yet your hazel eyes intrigue me.
Although I don't get wat u mean by "My flaming head swims."
Good job!
Rapid Reader ;-)


Author's Response: --Although I don't get wat u mean by "My flaming head swims."-- Lily's hair is red. :)

Reviewer: Rapid Reader
Date: 12/22/06 16:04
Chapter: James's POV

Good one!

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 08/25/06 19:06
Chapter: Lily's POV

Both are wondeful! -applaudes-

Author's Response: Thank You! Again...

Reviewer: potions_perfection
Date: 08/25/06 19:06
Chapter: Lily's POV

Both are wondeful! -applaudes-

Author's Response: Thank You!

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 08/25/06 16:57
Chapter: Lily's POV

Good chapter/installment. I have on suggestion, though; maybe you could delete the comma after "fit." Just a grammar suggestion. But anyways, good job!! =) --RP

Author's Response: Okay.

Reviewer: two_magic_charms
Date: 08/24/06 9:22
Chapter: Lily's POV

your really good...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: two_magic_charms
Date: 08/24/06 9:21
Chapter: James's POV

sweet!

Author's Response: Yay!

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 08/18/06 18:12
Chapter: James's POV

I liked it!! You should right a L/J fic!! Your poems are really good!

Author's Response: I'm trying to write a H/G missing scene fic for a while now, but a dear friend of mine had passed away about a month ago, and it's sort of hard to write for a while. But thanks to my second first reviewer! Sort of really the sixteenth...

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