Reviews For Grey
Reviewer: BloodRayne
Date: 03/23/07 14:30
Chapter: one-shot

Wow...this is really heart-wrenching. I like how deeply you delved into Molly. When I read the summary, I thought it would be a Hermione/Ron story, so I was really surprised when I realized it was about Molly. It's a path not many people choose to venture. But this was truly amazing, extremely well written, with beautiful descriptions, especially the poem at the end.

P.S.Thanks again for the banner!



Author's Response: I like choosing things people don't really dive into, and so thank you! I was iffy on the poem at the end and I'm glad you liked it. =)

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 02/03/07 20:03
Chapter: one-shot

This was just so sad. I had guessed it was Mrs. Weasley before I started reading but I didn’t know it would be, you know.. The entire family dead, she lived for her family. Then her magic had gone, from lack of use? She was just so lonely. I hope this doesn't really happen in the books, no offense. I'm still rooting for a fluffy ending. Oh the last book is almost out, it's like the end of an era! Sorry I've just ranted in my review.

That photo album, and when she was looking at the pictures it gave me a lump in my throat the same way she had one.

Author's Response: Really? I tend not to give any major clues at the beginning. =) I wish for a fluffy ending too, but someteimes, it's just life...

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 01/27/07 14:53
Chapter: one-shot

Oh my...wow. That was extremely moving and beautiful. So terribly sad, too...Oh, wow.

I can't believe that small poem at the end. It's amazing. Just spectacular.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: Thanks. Now, I feel sorta bad for writing something really sad... Thanks for the comment on the poem! At some point I was wondering if it was too cheesy for the story or not. =P

Reviewer: Dumbledore Prince
Date: 10/20/06 2:32
Chapter: one-shot

Wow, that was simply beautiful. The dark imagery that you managed to portray is very convincing and real.

The morose and dark descriptions of the house intrigued me. I've never seen the Burrow being described in such haunting tones. Nor have I read about an old, weak and depressed Molly Weasley. Simply poignant.

The way you state her fondness for something grey, cold and mysterious in the evening of her life is ... excellent.

I can't think of ways to improve this - it's that well done. It's obvious that you've put a lot of effort into this. It was an amazing story!

~Mini.

Author's Response: Thanks Mini! I've never thought of the Burrow as depressing either... I think that's sort of what started this... But thank you so much for your wonderful review!

Reviewer: mugglegurl
Date: 08/27/06 22:16
Chapter: one-shot

So sad, Claire! But also beautifully written. Poor, poor Molly. I don't really read dark/angsty fics, but this one was really great!

Author's Response: Thanks, Jordan! And I usually don't read dark/angsty either... =D

Reviewer: marauder_since_1993
Date: 08/19/06 16:56
Chapter: one-shot

First reviewer! *plays kazoo*

Great story, fantastially written.

Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for the review! =)

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