Reviewer: nikster
Date: 10/29/06 7:24
Chapter: In Which Tonks Sees Something Potentially Dangerous

Really good chapter!
Cont soon!
I wonder how tonks will react!
Great writing!


Author's Response: Thanks heaps! Hmmm....I have plans for Tonks.... ;-) ~Tickled Pink~

Reviewer: ExpectoHouseElf
Date: 10/29/06 1:53
Chapter: In Which Tonks Sees Something Potentially Dangerous

^_^ this chapter has made me happy for some reason...maybe it was because Hermione wasn't portrayed in such aperfect light??...Hermione Granger...the insufferable know it all...not knowing what to do...I like this story very much and i'm so glad that i got to read it this evening...i can't wait to read more and woderful job on this chapter ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I reckon its so much more interesting when people act like there's a pre-planned dialogue...I really don't like it when people portray Hermione as perfect!! ~Tickled Pink~

Reviewer: makinmagic323
Date: 10/29/06 1:03
Chapter: In Which Tonks Sees Something Potentially Dangerous

yay i'm the first to review!

splendid!

Author's Response: Don't you love being the first?? ;-) (me too)! ~Tickled Pink~

Reviewer: ann
Date: 10/20/06 4:34
Chapter: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

pls hurry n update......love ur story


Author's Response: Cheers!! Well, it's now been approved...;-) ~Tickled Pink~

Reviewer: gymnasticsluver1
Date: 10/18/06 0:16
Chapter: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Please update or I'm gonna get an ulcer!

Author's Response: Its finally here...;-) I'm glad you love it!!! ~Tickled Pink~

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/13/06 1:37
Chapter: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

The horcrux was beautifully described... I would have never thought of that, but I love it! This chapter, in fact, this story, was and is amazing. Love it. And the comments on Hermione's knitting... An animal or a sock... Hillarious! You must keep writing.

As to length and updateness of chapters - I like them long, but quick. :) I exist to make life difficult.

And reads to reviews... I would love to know that! They should so post that information somewhere. Maybe it is posted. I'll have to look.

Anyhow... Terrific job!

~Juli

Author's Response: wow, juli, i just read all of your reviews at once, and i have to say thank you so so so much for your kind words - it's reviews like those that are really uplifting! yeah, i love having the portraits as little side characters, it's an interesting change from just people, don't you think? anyway, i did have the sixth chapter in queue, but it was rejected, so i'll have to work a little bit more on that, but i should have it up here soon! thanks again!!!

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/13/06 1:37
Chapter: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

The horcrux was beautifully described... I would have never thought of that, but I love it! This chapter, in fact, this story, was and is amazing. Love it. And the comments on Hermione's knitting... An animal or a sock... Hillarious! You must keep writing.

As to length and updateness of chapters - I like them long, but quick. :) I exist to make life difficult.

And reads to reviews... I would love to know that! They should so post that information somewhere. Maybe it is posted. I'll have to look.

Anyhow... Terrific job!

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/13/06 1:30
Chapter: In Which The Gossiping Duo, Er, Gossip, And A Certain Two Share Stolen Glances

Ooooh... I loved that "so you are checking me out" part. Wonderfully written, again... And Tonks's part was marvelous. The ring was perfecto.

Bravissima, yet again.

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/13/06 1:25
Chapter: In Which Oliver Burns His Finger And Ron Breaks A Beaker

Another intriguing chapter. I do believe this is a very good fic. I love the use of Dobby - and the oil in the paintings melting is pure genius. I love the portrait-people conversations. Brilliant.

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/13/06 1:20
Chapter: In Which Hermione Is Late And Argues In A Way She Normally Reserves For Ron Weasley

Ooooh, scandalacious.

Lovely story, lady. Lovely story. *nods* I simply adore how you have the portraits talking to each other... They sound so elderly, yet so loveable. And the confrontation was marvelous. Must keep reading. And you keep writing.

~Juli

Reviewer: EtherealElation
Date: 10/13/06 1:16
Chapter: In Which Hermione Runs Into A Person At Hogwarts Whom She Did Not Expect To Meet

Oh, wow.


There were so many great things in that chapter I can't even begin to list them all.


Hermione's in for a rough year, I take it.


I especially liked these parts:


Oh holy Merlin. This was going to be awkward.
(Don't know why people always use Merlin, but there, it definently fits)


‘No, I find that if I curl my hair that leaves no time for me to paint my nails,’ Oliver said with a straight face.
Sylvester gave a short, bark of a laugh. ‘I like you . . . too bad you're stuffed.’
‘Sorry?’
‘Listen, I’ve been in this office for the past 400 years, and in the past, what, nearly fifty years? There hasn’t been a single Defence Against the Dark Arts teacher that’s lasted more than a year. We haven’t had a death in a fair few years though, not since — ’
‘Quirrel, I know,’ Oliver said, not really disturbed by this. ‘I was here when that happened.’
‘Hold up, I nearly forgot, Barty Crouch junior as good as died, didn’t he? Dementor’s kiss and everything. THAT was an interesting year — I witness a lot, hanging in here.’

‘Well, I’m not planning on dying, so I’ll just have to take my chances, won’t I? So anyway, how do I choose my password?’

‘You pick whatever you like, and then anytime you want to change it, you have to tell me your original password, so I know you’re not an imposter or anything.’

Oliver had never had to pick a password before. He searched around for inspiration, and his glance fell on Hagrid’s cabin towards the other side of the grounds through the window. ‘Umm…..ok, what about “Niffler”?’

Sylvester raised his eyebrows, but swung open. ‘You, know,’ he said, his voice slightly muffled, ‘the password someone picks reveals a lot about their character.’
‘So I’m cute and cuddly?’ said Oliver, laughing, stepping into his apartment....
...‘You go crazy in order to get the treasure,’ came Sylvester’s voice as the portrait shut over the doorway with a click .


He was back in the game.

Just a few of the many awesome components in this masterpiece of a chapter.

And wait! There's more! Must go read the "next".


~Juli

Reviewer: savi_woman
Date: 10/12/06 4:57
Chapter: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

What happened to chapter 6?? was it rejected??

Author's Response: yeah it was, and while i was away, more's the pity. i think it may have been too graphic or something, so i'll go over it and tone it down a bit now that i'm back. it should be up soon!!

Reviewer: durr
Date: 10/02/06 17:40
Chapter: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

omg ok i love this story ... WRITE MORE BEFORE I HAVE A HERNIA!

Author's Response: hehehe thanks heaps! i'll do my best to keep the updates coming fast!

Reviewer: xMeTtAlLiCAnGeLx
Date: 10/01/06 20:22
Chapter: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

i absolutely need to hear an update from you! this story is AMAZING. Did you hear me? AMAZING. The characters are all portrayed excellently, the plot is interesting and fun, and your writing is great. Look forward to hearing from me after your next update!

Author's Response: thank you so so much!!! i've got the next chapter up (sorry about the wait - it should be validated soon) and i do look forward to you immensly!

Reviewer: hermione_incarnate
Date: 10/01/06 5:26
Chapter: In Which Hermione Runs Into A Person At Hogwarts Whom She Did Not Expect To Meet

pretty good story~! i like it !

Author's Response: thanks! ;-)

Reviewer: stefi9
Date: 09/30/06 13:30
Chapter: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

i love your story and i have absolutly no idea why because i am the biggest ron/hermione shipper. anyways, to answer your question i prefer for you to update fast even if that means the chapter is shorter, so update soon!!!

Author's Response: thanks heaps! i knwo what you mean about ron/hermione, but hermione's just too good a character not to mess around with! hehehe!!

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 09/29/06 21:56
Chapter: In Which Hermione Does Her Level Best Not To Blush And Fails Admirably

i like longer chapters!!!
another great chappie!!!
update asap!

Author's Response: thanks again!!

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 09/29/06 21:35
Chapter: In Which The Gossiping Duo, Er, Gossip, And A Certain Two Share Stolen Glances

BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!


Author's Response: thanks so much!! ;-)

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 09/29/06 21:10
Chapter: In Which Oliver Burns His Finger And Ron Breaks A Beaker

STUPID ME ITS ALREADY UPDATED !!!!!!

Author's Response: lol!! :-)

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 09/29/06 21:09
Chapter: In Which Oliver Burns His Finger And Ron Breaks A Beaker

SORRY for the long wait on reviewing but Ive been busy!!
wow lovely chappie!!
omg! update asap!

Author's Response: that's all good (i just read your next review, lol!) btw, is your name from Moulin Rouge? i love that movie!!

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