Reviewer: LaneTechFreshie
Date: 10/02/06 13:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

ARGH! I had written a review, but it didn't want to send. That makes me angry. What did i write? Um..>i like Gen's name; creative. I'm guessing you're French. Cool. Oh, i liked how you made Lily melt at Sirius' smile. That's not a normal thing, and it's unique and creative. Uh oh. James and LIy in the same house? That's trouble. :-). But..I can't wait to read the next. Don't slack! hehe. Oh, thanks for making Detentions a favorite!

Reviewer: roman_soldier
Date: 08/22/06 9:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like the basis of your story, but I think you should format it more into seperate paragraphs. It's difficult to read as one huge block.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out! The paragraphs were originally split up, but I guess when I submitted the chapter I forgot to split them. Thanks!

Reviewer: roman_soldier
Date: 08/22/06 9:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like the basis of your story, but I think you should format it more into seperate paragraphs. It's difficult to read as one huge block.

Reviewer: HeirOfGryffindor
Date: 08/20/06 15:41
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awesome.

This is definitely going on my favorites.

Reviewer: SweetStar
Date: 08/20/06 12:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awsome beginning
im waiting for the next part...

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