Reviewer: LovelyxLena
Date: 12/03/06 19:48
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

The second to last sentence really got me.

"He was at peace, and when he stopped breathing he was ready."

Reviewer: Torn
Date: 06/21/06 19:06
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

i don't think Voldemort would have died so easily. And it would have been better if it was stretched over some chapters instead of one.

Reviewer: Itchy
Date: 05/18/06 8:22
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

interesting ideas. I would have preferred to read it over several chapters.. lots of detail for one page.

Reviewer: HPlover11390
Date: 06/12/05 18:47
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

Wow! That one left a powerful impact on me. It was so strong and emotional. You should write some more stories, definately.

Reviewer: JaxX
Date: 05/27/05 21:13
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

oh, sad ;( but i liked it.

Reviewer: GwenSandyhill
Date: 04/07/05 15:49
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

An interesting set of ideas. power in your words too. Not my favourite but one worth reading.

Reviewer: Tyran the Wolf Girl
Date: 03/25/05 11:44
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

A little to fast for my liking, but other wise it is a very good story. :)

Reviewer: lipiana
Date: 01/06/05 19:24
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

Very nice!! Great work!!

Reviewer: nolimit
Date: 12/30/04 5:53
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

A little too fast for me =) But i can c u get to the point fast lol ! Nice work...enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: emaleth
Date: 12/16/04 2:08
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

TRAGIC!

Reviewer: Tamika
Date: 11/16/04 1:37
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

Why on earth did this get such a bad rating?

Author's Response: Well I'm glad you liked it! And thanks Tamika ;)

Reviewer: Dumblex Dumbledore
Date: 11/14/04 8:02
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

Hey great story... keep it up

Reviewer: vampirechick
Date: 11/08/04 3:25
Chapter: The Beginning Of the End

good... keep writing , maybe a different ending? excelent plot

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