The second to last sentence really got me.
"He was at peace, and when he stopped breathing he was ready."
i don't think Voldemort would have died so easily. And it would have been better if it was stretched over some chapters instead of one.
interesting ideas. I would have preferred to read it over several chapters.. lots of detail for one page.
Wow! That one left a powerful impact on me. It was so strong and emotional. You should write some more stories, definately.
oh, sad ;( but i liked it.
An interesting set of ideas. power in your words too. Not my favourite but one worth reading.
A little to fast for my liking, but other wise it is a very good story. :)
Very nice!! Great work!!
A little too fast for me =) But i can c u get to the point fast lol ! Nice work...enjoyed reading it.
Why on earth did this get such a bad rating?
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you liked it! And thanks Tamika ;)
Hey great story... keep it up
good... keep writing , maybe a different ending? excelent plot