Reviewer: hmsoctopus
Date: 07/19/07 3:18
Chapter: Honeymooning

:) Excellent fic!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: kaister12
Date: 04/25/07 15:40
Chapter: Honeymooning

That was funny

Author's Response: Thanks again!

Reviewer: ILuvHP4Ev3r
Date: 02/19/07 0:55
Chapter: Honeymooning

LOL i was LAUGHING when sirius screams and is like "stay away!..dont come any closer!' and hes like "come any closer and i'll" 'you'll what?' and hes like i dont know but it will be horrible! hahahhaa!! and then he's like "it will be horrible--there will be carnage!"
*ILuvHP4Ev3r is laughing*
lol this was a good story, pretty funny too

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: nelly9
Date: 11/25/06 22:29
Chapter: Handfasted


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Reviewer: Chocolate_Frogs_R_Us
Date: 11/22/06 21:39
Chapter: Handfasted

I liked this a lot! I thought it was cute and funny! Very well written -kudos to you!

Author's Response: Thanks so much-it was meant to be.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 08/23/06 20:59
Chapter: Honeymooning

Cute. I loved the handfasting! I'm not sure if the "adutlish" scenes were really neccessary, but it is your story after all. Anyway... I have given up hope of my fic winning anything after reading this one. :( But still, best of luck on the contest! :D

Author's Response:
Thanks so much

I do feel that those scenes were necessary; it is, after all, a slash marriage and that is one of the things (among many) that drives the pairing.

(Yes, Remus, I know. You and Sirius have a very deep and meaningful relationship that transcends sex. *yapyapyap*

Oh, don't do that! That's just silly. You should never abandon, throw away, dismiss anything you write no matter how silly it seems.


Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 08/22/06 18:08
Chapter: Honeymooning

Gosh, Moony is just horny now isn't he? *laughs*

Author's Response: He's always horny. Has been since about...fifth year, methinks. Thanks!

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 08/12/06 18:49
Chapter: Handfasted

Okay I found this sweet and funny. Really funny. Especially how Sirius acts. LMAO.

Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 08/12/06 6:37
Chapter: Handfasted

VERY nice. I love wierd old marriage things - there were, for example, two types of Merovinigan weddings - one, permanent, and one where the girl could be given back to her father. Sort of Like buying at Macy's. I have no idea how long you had to return her....

Why is the Ultra-confident Lily so sort-of-confused at points? Why hadn't shee told them about vows? Because you don't really need vows? Were these legal Muggle Marriages in the past, or legal Wizard marriages, and while I kow they aren't legal Muggle marriages now, are they still legal Wizard marriages at the time this is done?

My favortie line?

"...he hopes he's not just imagining because he's been too nervous to eat today and he might be hallucinating."

I like it because it introduces exactly the sort of totally mundane thing people actually think about at moments like that.

Sirius appears more human in his nervousness than we ever get to see in Canon, and it shows how strong Remus is, which is definately Canon, but not very overt and therefore easily overlooked or forgotten, and this is totally consistent with your continuting characterization of both of them.

Good Job!


Author's Response:
I should love to hear more about those. Either one, actually.

I think because she probably only knows the basics of it and hasn't attended many Wizarding weddings, let alone officiated one, above all a gay one, so isn't entirely sure about the vows. I'm sure the Wizarding world must have different ones than we do, at that.

When you say 'these' you mean handfasting, right? Those were legal Muggle marriages back then and I'm sure that Wizards used em as well. They are a bit of an obscure reference, and I'm not surprised that Remus and Lily know about them, but not Sirius and Remus.

Are they legal Wizarding marriages? I'm not entirely sure. Shall have to consult with Remus about them. I know that they were legal for straight couples, and I think that, as the Wizarding World might not have been faced with that many gay couples requesting a legal marriage of any sort, this might have done it. Civil ceremony, if you will.

My favorite bit: “How do I look?” he asks, running his fingers through his newly short hair before placing his hand on the knob. “Terrified.” “Right,” Sirius says, and opens it.

Taking your word on that one...although I like to think I have a fairly good imagination....

Top!Remus rules!!!!!!111!!!!!1!!!1*laughs manic fangirl laugh*


Thank you.

Reviewer: Mortmagic
Date: 08/12/06 5:10
Chapter: Handfasted

Nice start, why does he feel weak though? is he under a spell?

Author's Response: Cause he's about to be married. Wouldn't you feel a bit weak in the knees if you were about to change your entire life with the utterance of just two words? And of course he'd under a spell-Moony's.

Date: 08/12/06 1:34
Chapter: Handfasted

YEAH! First review! I love this story! I love allof your stories actually!

Author's Response: Hee. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!

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