Reviews For Storm of Darkness
Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 12/12/06 17:45
Chapter: Healing

I still love it, but I have a question!

Right here:
“I have to save her!” Harry cried, but Snape silenced him.

“Yes, that is what I am going to try to allow you to do,” he said,

Does this mean that Hermione can be saved? Her becoming a vampire is the part that gets me. That's just inhumane! But, I understand that it's part of the story. Voldie and Valil are inhumane, not you. :-)

10/10

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 12/12/06 17:38
Chapter: One of Us

Wow. That's brutal, but it's really good. Wow. That is like, all I can say. Its really good. Keep writing, because you're good.

10/10

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 12/12/06 17:32
Chapter: The Muggle Cabin

Well, it's starting to clear up! I love this story! And I just started it!

10/10

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 12/12/06 17:19
Chapter: Among the Dead

OMG. That was almost scary. I can't believe it! Wow. That was really nicely written, but I am in shock. I'm definately going to keep reading.

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 12/12/06 17:14
Chapter: Swallowed

That was 'sposed to be AliKt716, if you didn't get that typo. I have a need to correct myself. I'll read ch. 2 now. This is probably going on my favorites.

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 12/12/06 17:13
Chapter: Swallowed

Wow. That was really good. It feels like you have a good plot line and it sounds worked out. I really like it so far. It sounds very professional and you used a nice cliffhanger. It's really good.
~10/10~
~AliKt17~

Reviewer: history
Date: 12/02/06 14:35
Chapter: Swallowed

I just found your story and I love it!! Normally I don't like altenative universe stories but this is constructly so well I just can't help myself. Please kep writing!

Reviewer: LoOnY_for_Harry
Date: 12/01/06 15:57
Chapter: Deliverance

Amazing! More, please!!!

Reviewer: LoOnY_for_Harry
Date: 12/01/06 15:03
Chapter: Servant

Wow.... amazingly emotional!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/24/06 20:59
Chapter: Deliverance

YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEESSSSSSSS! Yay, Hermione won't be a vampire! YAY! And Ginny will get her will back without forgetting Harry (I think.) and Ron will be taken from the Death Eaters... Oh goodness! This is great! When I started reading this, I gave up on it because I didn't like the fact that Hermione was a monster and there seemed to be no hope for them. But, when a coupleof chapters were posted, I got curious and now this is on my favorites! Now that I've bored you with my long story, I'll finish with the fact that I am soooooo glad I didn't give up completely and I hope you update really really super soon!
~Moony :) :) :)
PS-This chapter made me very happy! Thank you, I needed that!

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 11/24/06 20:45
Chapter: Deliverance

How sweet! I know it's not H/Hr, but for now I'll pretend it is. Please update soon! I love this fic!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/20/06 21:06
Chapter: Deliverance

Validation would be nice... I hope there is a way to save Hermione. And Ginny. And Ron. Will there be a happy ending? I'm getting annoying now, aren't I? Then I'll just wish you luck on quick validation!
~Moony

Author's Response: Hermione just got saved...and they're coming...don't worry!

Author's Response: wait...ignore that!!!! ahhh!!!! :-)

Reviewer: Apolla Lune
Date: 11/19/06 19:52
Chapter: Healing

You know, I can already see that Harry is going to have some difficulty getting to save our dearest Ginevra from ultimate peril when he's slowly being killed. Oh, well. :p

Author's Response: how did you know? :-p. but then...that's the fun of it, right?

Reviewer: magicalmuggle911
Date: 11/19/06 14:34
Chapter: Healing

omg such a cool chapter but i like the ginny parts the best even thuogh they make me feel sick coz malfoys a big awful . . . well i better not say just please write more soon ! ! !

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 11/19/06 14:25
Chapter: Healing

*twitch* I have mixed feelings about this chapter. It was well-written and that Ginny-remembering-him-keeps-him-alive thing is cool, but I hate Ginny! I have never liked Harry/Ginny. It's just... ugh. I know that it's stupid and immature, but I don't care. *bangs head on table* I like this fic, though. Please update soon!

-Crystal

Reviewer: Apolla Lune
Date: 11/19/06 12:41
Chapter: Healing

Nice story.Update soon!

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 11/19/06 10:59
Chapter: Healing

Here we go! To the action! YAY! Even if it was not very full of action, I liked it. It has to be done or else we have Harry running off into something injured and a miracle has to happen for him to win! Can't wait for your next update, so pleasetry to soon!
~Moony

Reviewer: Apolla Lune
Date: 11/18/06 10:20
Chapter: Swallowed

Hmmm... Color me intrigued.

Reviewer: Winged Artemis
Date: 11/15/06 22:16
Chapter: One of Us

whoa. that's very intense. great job, though!!! i see you've updated, so i'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter. nice job. :)

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 11/12/06 20:12
Chapter: One of Us

Oh my god. This is so depressing. Good, but depressing. Please update soon!

Author's Response: I know...i feel so bad!!!! i promise...it gets better!!!!

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