Reviews For Storm of Darkness
Reviewer: J_Bird
Date: 01/16/07 16:19
Chapter: A Final Understanding

Cool! Please, please, please continue! Don't make us wait too long! It is really good, full marks! =D

Reviewer: J_Bird
Date: 01/15/07 20:59
Chapter: Dead

Wow, when you said to take out the tissues I thought you were going to kill Harry! Poor Ginny, I have to say, I had a faint suspicion/hope that the same thing that protected Harry protected Ginny! I was worried you killed off all my favourite characters! Great writing, loved it! ^_^

Reviewer: killermis
Date: 01/15/07 20:26
Chapter: Dead




Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 01/15/07 18:08
Chapter: A Final Understanding


Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 01/15/07 11:56
Chapter: Dead

OH MY GOSH! I almost cried and THEN you brought her back to life?!?!?! Oh my gosh... I loved it. I really did. It was excellent. I think that if Ginny dies in the series, Harry would react like that. So IC it was scary. Well done. It was amazing and absolutely perfect.

Reviewer: AliKt716
Date: 01/15/07 9:36
Chapter: Dead

That was good! I loved how he was crying for her. It was so sweet when she woke up and he was crying for her. If she really is alive, that is. This is one of the BEST chapters yet.
11/10! (yes, I liked it THAT much)

Reviewer: Snoopygonewilder
Date: 01/15/07 9:13
Chapter: Dead

This is the firts story I added as my favorite, everytime you write a chapter I know it is one of my favorites and I only have 3 faves... keep on the amazing writing, loved the capter.

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 01/15/07 9:10
Chapter: Dead

Wow... simply beautiful. I nearly cried.
But there is a mistake... I thought the Killing Curse was unblockable. So how did Harry manage to block Narcissa? Also, I think the term "dead as a doornail" wasn't appropriate for such an action packed section. But other than that and a few typos, it was wonderful!! 9/10

Author's Response: I just made it possible for that to happen because Harry, in his work with Snape, became much more powerful than he used to be and is a one of a kind wizard. that, in my mind, was how he was able to do that.

Reviewer: Alurastar
Date: 01/15/07 8:34
Chapter: Dead

good lord. you werent kidding about the tissues. then the part at the end i allmost fell out of my chair! good job with the twisting of the emotions there.

Reviewer: Peaches_9
Date: 01/13/07 15:17
Chapter: Dimming Light

That is a really big cliffy. Wow.
I kinda jate you for it.

Please, please, PLEASE hurry up mods and accept the story!

Reviewer: LoOnY_for_Harry
Date: 01/12/07 15:36
Chapter: Dimming Light

AAHH! Cliffhanger! I can't stand it! Don't make Ginny kill Harry! Her love for him will cancel out the curse, right?
*Mutters to self: Think happy thoughts. Think happy thougts* I'm so glad that Hermione is mortal again and that she and Ron are reunited. It's also so fairy tale-ish that Harry and Ginny and together, so I guess I knew it wouldn't last.
AWESOME job, you really know how to keep me hanging on. I will be so sad when this story ends.... but, for now, keep up the great work and update when you can. Thanks for creating such an addicting fic! ;)

Reviewer: TheDogStar
Date: 01/08/07 13:22
Chapter: Dimming Light

D'you know your about the only author on my favourites that actually updates. EVER. hehe love the story

Reviewer: history
Date: 01/08/07 12:51
Chapter: Dimming Light

Please tell me there's another loophole in that curse!

Reviewer: magicalmuggle911
Date: 01/08/07 10:53
Chapter: Dimming Light

awww i love a good reunion.I think i know what might happen but i won't voice my thoughts in case i'm wrong.Good chapter like the cliffie at the end i hate and love your cliffies lol plz update soon

Reviewer: Alurastar
Date: 01/08/07 7:45
Chapter: Dimming Light

i like the twist. Ginny is gonna be forced to try and kill Harry. thats a new one. so far its a very good story. i look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 01/07/07 23:51
Chapter: Dimming Light

Well, I am sure that they could just order Ginny not to do it. I know that you wouldn't kill Harry off so soon, so I will not shout 'NOOOOOO!' as I had planned to do. Awesome chapter and I can't wait for more! Till next time,

Reviewer: MankyOldBoot
Date: 01/07/07 22:57
Chapter: Dimming Light

This is going really well - some typos here and there - "presumably" spelled "presumadly" is one that comes to mind, I think it was in this chapter even. I can't remember anymore at the moment, wanted to read straight through, I'll let you know if I find more. Keep writing, it's an enjoyable story. Looking forward to finding out about Luna and Neville as well.

Author's Response: Neville is dead...sorry :-(

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 01/07/07 19:31
Chapter: Dimming Light

No!!! Wait... Hermione or Harry can order her not to, right? ... *is nervous* Or one of them can order her to not take orders from Narcissa or Draco... would that work?
Anyway... I liked this chapter! Ginny and Harry united... :D So far, this story is so suspenseful! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: Hedwig with a quill
Date: 01/07/07 19:01
Chapter: Dimming Light


Reviewer: Athene713
Date: 01/07/07 17:21
Chapter: Dimming Light

Nooo! Major cliffie! Please update soon, you've got me hooked and now I can't wait for the next chapter, so hurry up!!!

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