Children cry and people die,
At the hands of the man with scarlet snake eyes.
That sent shivers up my spine ...
Its pretty good, but poems like these don't usually sound good when rhymed for future reference.
That was amazing and I loved the suspense it brought. I am very skillful writing poems myself, and I just submitted one to be read and aproved, but other than that I have no stories. But, If you want to read any of my other poems not about HP, then email me at firstname.lastname@example.org. Bye!
Oooooo....I like this one! I love poetry a lot and this one was really good! And heck no the chosen one won't fail!!! hahahaha... at least i hope not.....*panicks*
p.s. "Children cry and people die,
At the hands of the man with scarlet snake eyes."
That part gave me chills! It was really well written but sad! Ah! I just love this poem!!!!! Are you gonna write more???
I think it is good. It has a uniqueness to it. Keep em coming.
Author's Response: Thanx.I didn't know u had one of these intell now.but yea...thanx.later
I liked it. My best ideas come at about two a.m. =D
Author's Response: Heheheheh, cool. I'm pretty much crazy at two a.m., but that's the best time to write. Thanks for the review. I'll check out your stuff sometime soon...
Hey, dude...I see no one has been reading your story...poem...whatever. Or at least they haven't been reviewing...hmm...sorry 'bout that. Hey, are you going to try that other one again...? I think it could make it...hopefully...
Author's Response: YEA....do u steel have the other one?...well i hope so....oh and WERE"S Homyon? LOL and Leminy...lol.well ttyl peace
Author's Response: Edit to "Author's Response": Yeah...do you still have the other one? Well, I hope so...oh, and where's Hermyown? LOL...and Lemony...lol. Well, ttyl...peace.
Hey...nice job! Yay us! And other stuff...I see the other poem you wrote didn't make it...so sorry 'bout that...
Author's Response: Yeah...the other one got deleted...and that sucks big...um...lemons. Thanks for reviewing, dude...