This is great! Sweet and romantic--and funny too.
"What do you mean he's fainting? Is he all right?" I crack up every time I read that!
Anyway. Great job!
Looooooove it! Love it, love it, love it!
That's so sweet! I wish it had moved a bit slower though. It seemed rushed, and I would have loved to savor it longer.
I'm curious--why are you writing in a different style than you usually write? Did your sister ask for something specific or did you just feel like writing in a new style?
In any case, a really nice story. Keep writing!
Smiles,
Luna
What a lovely story! I have the biggest smile on my face right now. Thanks x
aww, such a cute storyy. good job
Author's Response: Merci
awwwwwwah! that was well sweet! =]
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So cute! Well constructed and well written for such a short story. I could have had more detail, but that's minor stuff. Good job!
Author's Response: Glad you liked. =) Thanks for reviewing!
really sweet!! love how you wrote it (you got the characters right and everything!!) sorry, it's just that lots of stories make them sound very odd.
Author's Response: Thank you! I realize it was quite fluffy, but it's nice to hear that someone thought I had the characters more or less right. =)
awww.....that was so cute!
keep up the good writing!
Charlene
Author's Response: Thanks, Charlene.
omg that is sooo cute! i LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it, thanks! =)
so sweet! cute and fluffy! just how i like them. maybe r/hr kiss wouldve been good, but overall it was a cute little one-shot.
Author's Response: You're right, you're right about the kisses...Thank you for reviewing!
Again wonderful though I can't believe your a snape and hermy supporter whatever, your choice.I also just read your bio and you didn't put anything in there about the Beatles. I'm very disappointed! Just Kidding
-Bubs
Author's Response: Just for you (and for me, I should say that in there) I now have a tribute to that remarkable foursome. =)
I loved it, it was so sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks =)
it was short and sweet....it was really good
Author's Response: Sooooo many reviewers said short and sweet...I guess that's not a bad thing. Thanks =)
awww totally cuuuuue!!!
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Clever idea! Very nice one-shot. I've read a lot of these things and it's nice to see some new ideas. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I am very very happy to have this be called clever. =)
SWWEEEEET!!!!
Author's Response: THAAAAAAAAANKS!!!!
