Reviewer: Shadows_keeper21
Date: 06/11/11 12:25
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

Pretty good, but the sotry keeps switching characters thought and while it's good to have insight, I feel like the story is missing the climax, or important part. There's no one part that sticks out.

Reviewer: Karya
Date: 05/25/08 22:23
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

wow looks really good so far please come up with the next chapter the plot looks very interesting
great work!

Reviewer: Vampire Hunter Blade
Date: 03/22/08 18:18
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

Interesting, update soon please :-)

Reviewer: crookshanx_rox
Date: 12/09/06 2:21
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

it's great!!!!!!!! plz cont. lol

Reviewer: crookshanx_rox
Date: 12/09/06 2:21
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

it's great!!!!!!!! plz cont. lol

Reviewer: kumydabookworm
Date: 11/20/06 22:20
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

I love Draco/Ginny. :D I'm so glad a writer with your talent decided to write a D/G fiction. :) Anyway, I like your characterization of Ginny.

The only issue I had was this chapter seems so abrupt, so short. I feel like elaboration would really help pull readers in a bit more.

But brilliant characterization of Lucius really made me shiver. :D

Love,
Kumy

P.S. My thank-you review for handing that OC assignment in on short notice. *hugs*

Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 11/14/06 23:59
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

I can also absolutely see that happening, it's perfect. Update soon!

Reviewer: JewellPotterFan
Date: 11/14/06 23:58
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

oooh...I hate Lucius! Terrific idea, great job so far.

Reviewer: dr324
Date: 11/08/06 15:34
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

Lovw the concept!

Reviewer: Jenn22291
Date: 08/28/06 11:23
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

Very interesting. I never would have thought that Ginny would marry Draco under any circumstances, but you have managed to make it believable. Great job. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: weasleychick92
Date: 08/10/06 18:40
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

Oooooo, cliffy...

Reviewer: candlegiglia
Date: 08/10/06 12:27
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

if i know Ginny, she would never marry Draco Malfoly. She'd rather die than live with him.

Author's Response: Ginny is marrying Draco only to spy on him and his family. Harry is long gone and Ginny has decided that she's going to live for the Order. She's doing her "duty". I've included my explanation in this chapter. And, for future refrence, it's Malfoy. Only one "L". Thanks for your opinion, MadMar

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 08/10/06 12:07
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

How Could Ginny Do That *sniff*
Nice story though
:)

Reviewer: goldeneyes
Date: 08/10/06 10:25
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

This is such a good chapter!!! its really exciting! keep writing!

Goldeneyes

Reviewer: halfbloodprincess22
Date: 08/10/06 7:41
Chapter: Prolouge: Reflections

hey. i'm interested to see where this is going, so update soon.

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