Reviews For Night Magic
Reviewer: GinnyFairy
Date: 01/12/08 11:21
Chapter: An Unwanted Knight

I hate Cliffies!!!! It's really good so far!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: wagepeace
Date: 01/11/08 6:55
Chapter: Awakened

I really like the story, it was sweet and didn't feel rushed. The only thing that threw me off is that they skipped all of the middle steps... I mean, he's never seen her chest, or even in just a bra and then they have sex? Maybe I'm just a more linear person haha... but I really do like the story. Very well written.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it! You do make a good point, but in my head, Lily wasn't running around the dorm in her undergarments on a regular basis, and like I said in the third chapter, she always put up boundaries because in the back of her mind, she kept waiting for James to leave her and didn't want to be hurt.

Reviewer: SlyDraco
Date: 12/17/07 0:44
Chapter: Awakened

Please.....please continue

Author's Response: Thanks for the review...More is on the way, I promise!

Author's Response: I am working on updating This is NOT About and possibly creating another fanfic. Sorry if the above was misleading, but I don't think that anything will be added to Night Magic at this time.

Reviewer: dixiechic1593
Date: 10/28/07 9:57
Chapter: Awakened

I could fall in love with any one with the name James i fancied that name lol great story!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! I really like the name James too, but have no idea how much influence the books have had on that opinion.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 10/03/07 21:28
Chapter: Awakened

I allready read the R/H fic and it was awesome. But I like this a lot better as I love Lily/James. Is it to much to ask that you check out my 2 L/J one shots. I would simply love your opinion on them. Oh, and about reviewing each chapter, well you wrote it chapter by chapter so why shouldn't it be reviewed that way?=Sammy

Author's Response: Touche. I agree actually, but many people review after they've read the whole thing and made up their mind about it. Sure, I'll look up your two fics and read them!

Author's Response: Touche. I agree actually, but many people review after they've read the whole thing and made up their mind about it. Sure, I'll look up your two fics and read them!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 10/03/07 9:10
Chapter: Awakened

That was a very noughty chapter but I really loved the fic. You did an amazing job. I guess there isn't room for updates in this, is there?=Sammy

Author's Response: As far as updates go on this I'm not sure, but you can always look into my other two pieces, "Love, Lost and Found" which is a Harry/Ginny and "This is NOT About" which is a Ron/Hermione piece that's not finished yet but currently has 2 chapters posted.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 10/03/07 8:56
Chapter: Killing Me Softly

The next chapter better be just as good. Which might be hard as this was bloody perfect.=Sammy

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. I don't think I've ever had anyone review each chapter before!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 10/03/07 8:45
Chapter: Meltdown

Awwwwwww, James is a sweetie and I adore yiur writing style.=Sammy

Author's Response: Yes, I did want to make him nice and a little vulnerable.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 10/03/07 8:26
Chapter: An Unwanted Knight

I love your characterizarion of Lily. I can just imagine her beeing mean and then wanting to apologize.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Ginny_Luvs_Malfoy
Date: 09/18/07 9:10
Chapter: Awakened

very good. i liked how the relationship took that slight nose dive before rising up higher than ever.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review; I appreciate it!

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 09/07/07 22:25
Chapter: Awakened

Very, very nice. This seemed very in character and that's pretty hard to find. I also loved the reference to Ginny's name. Amazing work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I appreciate the feedback. I like your screen name, very cute!

Reviewer: mistyquest
Date: 08/30/07 21:23
Chapter: Awakened

Amazing. Writing scenes like that is hard. You did wonderfully.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/12/07 9:25
Chapter: An Unwanted Knight

Right. Sorry. I accidentally clicked submit before I could say this.. anyway!!! Yes, I loved this fic. The thing that I thought was special was James' hesitation. I loved that! I loved how Lily took the initiative and my favorite part was when James said Lily was mental. lol. OK, that's all. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'd read a lot of fanfics that portrayed James as a bit of a playboy, (and while he certainly could have been), I saw him as a bit more of a monogamous person when I read "Snape's Worst Memory." At least as soon as Lily firmly planted herself in his mind. Dialogue is always hard to write, so I'm glad you liked what the characters said!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/11/07 15:47
Chapter: An Unwanted Knight

This story was great. I'll have to check out your other fanfics now...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! I hope you like my other work.

Reviewer: ILuvSirius01
Date: 07/05/07 3:59
Chapter: Awakened

Um, wow, that was very . . . interesting. I'd never been really into those types of romantics before. But that was really good, besides it seeming a little out there. I would like you to continue it or possibly make more J/L stories, cuz you're very good at them. So yea, good story =)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! For me, the fun in fan fiction is being able to be a little "out there" as you put it. Hope you enjoy reading Deathly Hallows!

Reviewer: lily princess
Date: 06/29/07 0:38
Chapter: Awakened

please continue the story; maybe about sirius and patty

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm trying right now to get This is NOT About sorted out with it's chapter 2 always getting rejected, but when that works out, I'll move on to this story. I hope you enjoy Deathly Hallows! At least we all have something to look forward to in the meantime.

Reviewer: Bedstuycutie
Date: 06/12/07 11:18
Chapter: An Unwanted Knight

I absolutely loved it! I really think you should continue the story. Im an eager beaver waiting to see/read what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do it for all the Lily/James fans!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the piece. The Lily/James community of shippers grows larger all the time. I'm working on a sequel.

Reviewer: evildarklore
Date: 06/07/07 17:06
Chapter: Awakened

I lovee love love it!!!!! THE MOST AWESOME STORY I HAVE READ!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: miss Ceilidh
Date: 06/05/07 21:16
Chapter: Killing Me Softly

puppy in spanish is "perrito"

Author's Response: I apologize for the mistake. Thanks for the tip! Please excuse my mediocre Spanish skills.

Reviewer: Cedrics love
Date: 06/04/07 19:44
Chapter: Awakened

I really think you should continue this story. its sooo good

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback. I am working on a continuation.

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