Reviewer: GrAnGeR_DaNgEr120
Date: 07/25/10 23:13
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

ooh! so sad. great story.

Reviewer: dracolover43454
Date: 06/02/09 15:40
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

omg i love this

Reviewer: wishes4everything
Date: 02/26/08 21:27
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

I'm confused. Why is Draco acting all...icky?...

Reviewer: raquel
Date: 10/20/07 21:26
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

I liked it

Reviewer: slayer_girl45
Date: 03/05/07 15:02
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

You sure do know how to write an ending. And you were born to write sob stories. I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Slytherin_Girl349
Date: 12/19/06 19:32
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

I loved it!! I hope you will continue this story, it deserves a sequel and you deserve more than claps. Bravo

Author's Response: THanks!

Reviewer: Nauf_dude
Date: 10/21/06 13:07
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!! AWESOME I LOVED IT!!! are you going to write more about this story i really want to know you are a tallented writter you can't leave the story like that!!!!!!!!! i won't let you! please put in an exra chapter i want to know if they end up together in the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it--and I am considering making a continuation... let's see!

Reviewer: Draco_is_hot
Date: 10/16/06 1:17
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

mgosh i wuv dis sooooooomuch!!!!!!! plz add sum more 2 dis its totaly awsome!!!!! 11/10

Author's Response: Whoa! 11/10? Thanks!! Never knew it was that nice!

Reviewer: Courtbrat
Date: 09/08/06 13:38
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

Rember my review from before!!! I just hope it did not hurt you too much!!!! I felt Bad just sending it to you!!!!


Reviewer: DracosPunkBabe
Date: 08/29/06 21:04
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

ahh, dat wuz beautiful ahh i feel like cryin lol, but yeah i loved it hope u write another like this its so good. laterz



Reviewer: Tell_no_lies
Date: 08/25/06 8:57
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

sooo goood

Reviewer: arwenevensatr
Date: 08/23/06 13:05
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. A shame she didn't recognize the snake was draco, I figuered it out before the story was over. good job.

Reviewer: DracoHermioneForever
Date: 08/22/06 21:16
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

aww i liked it!! it was soo nice but sad too!! keep up the good work!! i want to read more of your stories!!

Author's Response: That means a lot!

Reviewer: Tori2010
Date: 08/21/06 15:34
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet


Author's Response: hm. lemme explain...? he was an animagus, which is why he was a snake. they weren't at a courthouse, but in a courtyard. theres a difference, thanks very much.

Reviewer: Sarakime
Date: 08/19/06 12:55
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

Great story. Sad, though. Any thoughts of continuing it? Like, in the future, when he see's her again? I would love to see that. Good work!

Author's Response: Yes, I have been thinking of continuing the story (maybe an epilogue, or a sequel). And I've decided to write it out and see if the story's good enough to be posted here. So you choose if you want to wait for it or not. =) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PheonixTears
Date: 08/17/06 23:33
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

Awww....That was so sad. Wonderful piece of writing though, great work! ~PheonixTears

Author's Response: Thanks! That means a lot to me, since I'm trying to be at least a pretty good writer.

Reviewer: Courtbrat
Date: 08/17/06 21:31
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

You could have actually wrote something here! Not really any interaction beween the characters all I read was a bunch of crying and yelling by Hermione Maybe the next book you write I might enjoy it! Though I did think it was okay it was a sad story.

Author's Response: I have to be honest, that hurt a bit, but that will help me be a better writer. At least, I'm not wishing you a horrible day, like I would have in other circumstances, right? Just kidding, of course I won't. I appreciate the review all the same. =D

Reviewer: ronnyc718
Date: 08/17/06 14:09
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet

That's so sad! I kind of wish this wasn't a one-shot, so we could know more details about why he was hurt and if they ever get together after everything is safe. At the same time though, this is emotionally powerful, and it might lose some of that if the details were less ambiguous. Great job! *wonders away to fix broken heart*

Author's Response: Well, I was deciding if I should make it chaptered, but the plot was best short. And since you asked, I'm telling you the reason Draco couldn't come (but it's just in my head): Lord Voldeeemort was alerted of their secret meetings, and he planned to use Hermione and Draco as a way to get to Harry. But Draco (knowing that Hermione really cared for Harry--as a brother) refused--and he got hurt. He escaped part of the punishment somehow but decided to put an end to the relationship. And tada!!! We get to the story. Really happy you liked it!

Reviewer: helgaandgodric
Date: 08/17/06 12:03
Chapter: The Silver Charm Bracelet


okay, so i'm wicked proud of you. and i love this story!

*great big hugs!*

Author's Response: Haha-- thanks for beta-ing this! You helped me a lot! Very happy you liked it!

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