awww that was so cute, good characterisation and writing style and im liking the Irish touch!! of course, anyone with red hair will always sound slightly Irish-well they do to me anyway.
Author's Response: thank you, i just decided to make lily irish this time, so i'm glad you liked it! thanks for reading (and reviewing!)
i love little mermaid!!! haha, that was really cute! i loved it, great job!
Author's Response: thanks, isn't the little mermaid awesome? i'm glad you liked it!