Reviews For The Last Toast
Reviewer: Doctor Phoenix
Date: 03/10/07 17:38
Chapter: -

Actually, I found the exchange between the Marauders to be my favorite part of the story, so don't worry about not being funny. I could easily see the four of them having that conversation. I loved Sirius's comment about angels...that's just the sort of thing he would have said.
Some of your dialogue seems a little rehearsed...had Remus practiced what he was going to say?
I don't often cry over fanfics, but I will admit that you elicited a sniffle or two. Congrats.
Sincerely,
Doctor Phoenix of Ravenclaw, Knight of the Turnip Table

Reviewer: hogwartsduchess
Date: 08/14/06 8:03
Chapter: -

That was truly wonderful. The language was a bit formal, especially the 'you are' repeated throughout, however, it was very moving. A challenge excellently met!

~Kasey

Author's Response: Thankz Kasey!! i'll try doing something about the language though i guess the harm's done already :D thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: muggleclaw
Date: 08/12/06 21:00
Chapter: -

Short and sweet. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to read it and for liking it. :)

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 08/12/06 12:22
Chapter: -

that was very touching (I actually wish it had been in the book). good job!

Author's Response: thanks for taking the time to read and review. I really think Sirius deserved a better send off than the "veil"...so it is dedicated to him.

Reviewer: MaraudersWolf
Date: 08/12/06 9:29
Chapter: -

Good writing - hits the spot for me.

Author's Response: Not sure what you are saying, but i still love the fact that you read and reviewed. lol

Reviewer: maysiriusrestinpeace
Date: 08/11/06 18:34
Chapter: -

cute!! aww now im gonna cry oh y must the good die young??!! *sobs hysterically* by the way awesome story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I know, the thing about the good dying young absolutely sucks. Thanks for liking it

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 08/11/06 16:27
Chapter: -

Poor Sirius! I don't think he'll go to hell. I absolutly loved him. Anyway, this was sweet. A nice send off for old Padfoot.

Author's Response: Personally, even I'm praying that he doesn't go to hell either. I can almost see him with the angels..lol Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 08/11/06 16:03
Chapter: -

Good job! Sirius is one of my favorite characters and I think you portrayed him very accurately. I liked it a lot.

Author's Response: Thanks panther! Sirius is one of my fa characters too and trust me it was hard to write about his death.

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