Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 12/15/08 1:35
Chapter: Fortune Tells

Wow. Just...wow. I adore this fic, and it's going into my favorites.

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 01/12/07 19:44
Chapter: Fortune Tells

You have to love those last second plot-bunnies, they really are wonderful! I’d have to say he thing I enjoyed most about this compared to other entries to this challenge was the way you personified ‘Fortune’, so instead of just making it the essence of fate, you made HER the essence of fate, and the hand that guided them.

And bravery fell with Lily Potter. I think perhaps this was the line that jumped out at me and made me smile, mostly because of the ties with the title, but also the image of the fall of bravery and what it symbolised. So, well done for writing it in such a short time and creating such a powerful effect.

Author's Response: Yes, those last-second plot bunnies can be an author's best friend. I'm glad that you liked the line about Lily; it was one of those that just sort of came to me as I wrote the scene, and it really stuck; I didn't want to change it at all. Thank you so much, Lurid, for the review, and I'm really glad that you liked the story. ~Megan

Reviewer: phoe_gurl
Date: 08/20/06 7:09
Chapter: Fortune Tells

that was soooo good. i loved it, what else is there to say? write some more! there you go.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing this story. I was quite proud of the result, and I am therefore glad that you loved it. ~Megan

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing this story. I was quite proud of the result, and I am therefore glad that you loved it. ~Megan

Reviewer: doorknobs
Date: 08/13/06 3:36
Chapter: Fortune Tells

That was a very interesting idea... Well done, I especially liked the ending!

Author's Response: Thanks! The idea came and I just had to go with it; the ending especially was a spur-of-the-moment decision, so I am glad you liked it. ~Megan

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 08/11/06 9:11
Chapter: Fortune Tells

i liked that it was really interesting and well written! Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments! For writing this story as quickly as I did, I'm pretty proud of the result. ~Megan

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments! For writing this story as quickly as I did, I'm pretty proud of the result. ~Megan

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