lol i loved it!! so sweet!
aww thats so cute :]
I like the ending very much, but you need to give more backstory for it. It's confusing how Lily made James upset and such...I don't really know how to explain it. But it's a good story
' “So, I guess you guys kissed and made up?” ' Lol!!! I really like your story! It's awesome! Hope you write lots more! (Unless you've already written more?...)
all this story is true if how mrs rowling make is happen. I only hope that she will make a recount of the story of harry's parents before she could write somthing else.
hehehe.....love it!
Author's Response: *dances in glee* Thanks for reviewing! I have a memory problem, and sometimes I forget if people like my stories. :P
I really love this. It's a very nice, satisfying ending. My favourite line is "I told him, ‘Grow up and stop asking me out.’ He’s done both. Why didn’t I say, ‘Grow up or stop asking me out’? That would have been so much easier."
This is a very good story.
Great job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm proud of my line. It was always how I figured Lily would feel, whenever I mentally wrote a JP/LE story. ^_^
awsome:)
Author's Response: I'll take that as a yes. ^_^
awsome:)
Author's Response: But is it awesomer than cookie dough ice cream?
loved it
Author's Response: *blows you a kiss* Much appreciated.
That was different! I really liked it!
Author's Response: It was, wasn't it? Well, I'm glad you think so.
aww, this is sweet and cute. it's well written and, while not too original, not clichéd either. good job, i really like your writing style. this was very good!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I appreciate your opinion. I'm currently working on two uber original stories, but I don't know if they'll make here. I'll try though.
wow you're an amazing writer. This was a great story, with just the right timing. well done ! :D
Author's Response: Timing? You liked the timing? What about James? How can you read a story with James in it and comment on the time? Geesh, I don't understand how people aren't totally obsessed with him. Teehee. Anyway, thanks for the review. ^_^
James is really stupid.
I love this story! I've never ever read one like it!
Author's Response: Of course you haven't! If you had, I wouldn't have written it for I despise unoriginality. Geesh, I hope my words don't come back to bite me.
Cuteness! I liked this way better than your other one :) Happy review, yay! I felt almost bad when I totally ripped apart the ending of that other one of yours that I forget the title of. But yea. That's me. Yay, I liked this one :)
-chris
Author's Response: That's funny because I like the other one more.
AW so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it write more will you!
Author's Response: Okay, this is just scary.
AW so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it write more will you!
Author's Response: I'm having deja vu without the little accents.
AW so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it write more will you!
Author's Response: *nods* I have. Check my bio for more.
