Reviews For A Potter Wedding
Reviewer: PotterFanatic72
Date: 08/18/11 14:48
Chapter: The Wedding Day

I love the end!! It's so ironic how it's a Malfoy!

Reviewer: PheonixFlamesForever
Date: 05/26/08 13:28
Chapter: The Wedding Day

Hello, I'm here to review your lovely story :)

Firstly, I believe this is a very sweet story and it is nicely writen.

However, sometimes I find it hard to understand who is talking to who. “Aww, come on, Ginny,” Harry spoke to his wife. “It’s not our fault. You’re fighting a losing battle, son. At first he seems to be addressing Ginny but then he refers to her as 'son' I'm sure it could be easily cleared up.

If someone had told him twenty-five tears I have a feeling you mean twenty-five years although actually, it kind of works.

“I’m just so nervous, Dad!” How old is James here? He seems, by his dialogue to be quite young, but maybe it's just him relying on his dad again, like old times.

I think it's highly original of you to have the wedding take place in the RoR. And in the middle of the story I think it's very IC to have Harry trying to accept that his children are growing up.

I had my suspicions about a certain Violet, that she was a Malfoy, that is. The interactions between Draco and Harry don't seem as formal as they could've been! Which is great!

Err, gotta go! great story!

Reviewer: misspoppy
Date: 02/29/08 18:35
Chapter: The Wedding Day

very good

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 11/26/07 14:33
Chapter: The Wedding Day

I thought this was great, and i love how it happens in the room of requirement. I don't know if it was your intent, but it seemed symbolic somehow, as if by having the wedding at the school, it united the Slytherin and Gryffindore houses too. And when Harry wasn't happy that his girls looked too grown up, it was so real, I guess thats how all parents must feel. Keep writing, hope to read more of your stuff.

Reviewer: fanofFred
Date: 09/20/07 15:14
Chapter: The Wedding Day

lol. I loved who Harry's in-law is!! Very, Very, cute. :)

Reviewer: mrdougan
Date: 07/14/07 3:50
Chapter: The Wedding Day

meshing of those two blood lines is something i haven't seen done in a long time.
however like most here, I would like to see some form of prequel or sequel. ie How did malfoy & potter set aside there differences? where & how did james/violet meet? what happens next in the saga? does the unexplained keep happening to Harry et al, or does it fall to the next generation.

either way - nice piece

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 06/30/07 12:59
Chapter: The Wedding Day

This was a really good story! Kind of funny, though. Harry and Draco are in-laws...

You should seriously consider writing a sequel, prequel, or both. It would be interesting to see how Harry and Draco's relationship progresses, and whether or not they'll forgive each other completely. 10/10!~

H_o_I

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm working on a prequel of sorts, but I'm having problems getting time to type it up. I'll try to get it soon. Thanks again.

Reviewer: marijnemijn
Date: 06/17/07 8:09
Chapter: The Wedding Day

so very cute
i really didn't see it coming i was like what?
he's marrying ron's kid
and then i was like, no probably not:p

Author's Response: It would be really bad if it was ron's kid, because ginny would be the mother, making them cousins. ew. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: slytherin_girl101
Date: 06/08/07 18:10
Chapter: The Wedding Day

*sob* i am such a sucker for weddings *sob* even though last weekend i went to one, i had to force myself to not cry. i succeded but reading this story, maybe one or two little tears fell...LOL...anyway, great job. 10/10

Reviewer: GK_Lovecraft
Date: 05/09/07 15:55
Chapter: The Wedding Day

Nice twist! For some reason, "Meet the Fokkers" is coming into mind, now. This could actually make a nice longer and quite lighthearted story.

Reviewer: GK_Lovecraft
Date: 05/09/07 15:54
Chapter: The Wedding Day

Nice twist! For some reason, "Meet the Fokkers" is coming into mind, now. This could actually make a nice longer and quite lighthearted story.

Reviewer: human_skrewt
Date: 04/29/07 12:04
Chapter: The Wedding Day

well i cnt say tht i dint expect it but i nvr expectedto reed it!!!! but holy **** i really works if u think hard enuff i mean low a brain cell hard but hard enuff n i thnk tht the main point in ritin this was he malfoy bit wasnt it??? still awsome non the less

Author's Response: Thank you for sending me a review. I always appreciate getting feedback. Even feedback that is very difficult to read. Thanks again.

Author's Response: Thank you for sending me a review. I always appreciate getting feedback. Even feedback that is very difficult to read. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 04/04/07 10:49
Chapter: The Wedding Day

This would have made an amazing long fanfic. I like the whole idea on how Harry's son is marrying Draco's daughter. Although I will always dislike Draco, i DO feel a bit sorry for him.

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing. i have in the works a story about the children when they are in school. It's told from the view point of the oldest girl. thanks again

Reviewer: Queen_Hermione
Date: 03/30/07 18:20
Chapter: The Wedding Day

Cute story! I liked the twist that James married Draco's daughter, I wasn't expecting that.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I love getting feedback from readers

Reviewer: Queen_Hermione
Date: 03/30/07 18:19
Chapter: The Wedding Day

Cute story! I liked the twist that James married Draco's daughter, I wasn't expecting that.

Reviewer: Lavender_L
Date: 03/26/07 19:13
Chapter: The Wedding Day

Wow, that was really suprising, a Potter & Malfoy getting married!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I live suprise my readers

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 02/06/07 3:59
Chapter: The Wedding Day

ok i guess

Reviewer: Jasmine Potter
Date: 01/04/07 17:33
Chapter: The Wedding Day

what a cute story, i love it!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I can't wait until I get my next story finished.

Reviewer: Magical Pixie Horse
Date: 12/21/06 15:38
Chapter: The Wedding Day

I loved the story! A son of Harry's and a daughter of Draco's getting married! Wow! That was a great idea! Great job. Hope to read more by you!

LMPH3

P.S. Thanks for R&R my story Love Is The Greatest Power!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I always make a point to review others. I'm in the process of getting my next story updated.

Reviewer: Angel_In_Training
Date: 12/04/06 14:07
Chapter: The Wedding Day

Love this story!

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