Reviews For Tempting the Snake
Reviewer: Nefabit
Date: 09/17/06 4:02
Chapter: Tempting the Snake

This is a wonderful story; a great one-time shot, however depresing. I like your style. Also, there is a small typo that I thought I should bring to your attention:
"He pulled open the red oak door, revealing his inheritance almost exactly as he had left it. Spotless with distinguished portraits of famous wizards and wizards. " It should be "witches and wizards", no?

Author's Response: Ahh. I see. Yes, it should be "witches and wizards." I'll probably go and fix that sometime. Thanks, though! =D

Author's Response: Ahh. I see. Yes, it should be "witches and wizards." I'll probably go and fix that sometime. Thanks, though! =D

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 08/20/06 11:57
Chapter: Tempting the Snake

this is really good
and sad

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