Reviewer: NitaEmmaHP
Date: 12/09/10 18:30
Chapter: Funeral

oh what's going happen next????!!!! so excited!!! :)

Author's Response: Expect an appearance from Ron...:D

Reviewer: NitaEmmaHP
Date: 12/09/10 18:24
Chapter: Uncertainty

i did not see michael dying omg! shocking (high vioce)

Reviewer: NitaEmmaHP
Date: 12/09/10 18:17
Chapter: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words

one of the most emtional chapters.... love it!!! :)

Reviewer: NitaEmmaHP
Date: 12/08/10 20:03
Chapter: Flowers

oh... so sweet... so emotional ... could even tear up myself :)

Reviewer: NitaEmmaHP
Date: 12/05/10 18:11
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

Man, when will they make up all ready. This is killing me

Reviewer: NitaEmmaHP
Date: 12/05/10 15:22
Chapter: Falling Apart

Chapter so EXCITING!!!

Reviewer: NitaEmmaHP
Date: 12/05/10 15:14
Chapter: Happy New Year

Loved that last part!!! wonder what's going to happen?! :)

Reviewer: NitaEmmaHP
Date: 12/05/10 14:58
Chapter: The Right Decision?

Loved the first chapter!! good idea with swiching back 7 forth with the PoVs ...!!!

Reviewer: RonW
Date: 11/29/10 8:15
Chapter: Funeral

can we see ron now?? really it isnt a stiry of Ron and hermione, but micheal and hermione.. ron is just a supporting role.. how could you be so biased with him??

Author's Response: Believe it or not, I adore Ron. He is back in the next chapter, though briefly.

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley 25
Date: 11/21/10 8:24
Chapter: Funeral

Omg that was the best story ever. I actually love you for writing this, I wait for another chapter but it never comes oh please tell me if there is another one!! Please please please write another one .... Love Allie x

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yes, there are still a few chapters left that I need to get around to writing!

Reviewer: Potterlover171
Date: 11/15/10 19:25
Chapter: Funeral

I really like this chapter. I do not think you need to change a thing. How long till the next update? I've been following this story for awhile now and am glad I finally got this update. What happened to Hermione and her friends? Do they become distant? Please hurry and update so I can find out what happened.

Author's Response: Thank you. Not too long for the next chapter to be posted, I hope. I've finished writing it and am now editing.

Reviewer: charmaine23
Date: 11/14/10 13:00
Chapter: Funeral

Im also new to the fanfic thing.. This is the second one i read, i found it yesterday and finished today and i LOVED the story! I loved the way you ended this chapter and you are an AMAZING writer. I'd like to see Ron in the next chapter, and how do we know when you write another one?

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm flattered! I think you can add the story to your favorites and the site will e-mail you when there is an update? I'm not sure :/

Reviewer: hpmommie97
Date: 10/31/10 8:01
Chapter: Funeral

I'm a new reader and I absolutely LOVE this story!!!! I'm new a the fan fic thing so I don't know how you update people when you have written more. So I will give you my email. I would love for you to let me know when you have more posted. I can't wait!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I think you can sign up for notifications but I'm not sure how...

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 09/25/10 18:34
Chapter: Funeral

AMAZING story so far! Hermione's life with her husband was more detailed than I expected. I really hope she is able to get her life back together and find her way back to Ron. He hasn't shown up in the story as much as I had hoped! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I think a lot of you will like what's coming up... ;)

Reviewer: mkcbradley
Date: 09/17/10 22:51
Chapter: Funeral

I love this story! It broke my heart to read the description of Elizabeth's appearence at the funeral, then the image of her crying on Molly's shoulder. It will be interesting to see how life changes for Hermione after the funeral.

Author's Response: :) I'm glad you were touched by it. This was a chapter hard to write.

Reviewer: BrunetteGinny
Date: 09/14/10 14:46
Chapter: Funeral

OMG!!!! I love this selection more than any other! U are an amazing writer!

Author's Response: Thank you so so much!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 09/08/10 17:07
Chapter: Funeral

an update coming soon! :D thanks for sticking with this, i love it! unknown to me, mugglenet stopped sending me e-mails when one of my favs was updated, so i didn't get to read the new chapter, let alone leave a big review! so it's coming in the near future :-)

Author's Response: Hey! Look forward to that review! :)

Reviewer: Aussiegirl_USA
Date: 09/04/10 13:10
Chapter: Funeral

This story is getting really good. I hope you continue it. I am looking forward to seeing hermione continue her path.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: misscastiel
Date: 08/26/10 14:22
Chapter: Funeral

This was amazing. These last few chapters have definitely been the best, even though they were all well written and had a fantastic story line. I hope that this story never ends! Please keep it going for a while and i'm sure we would all love to see some Hermione/Ron action. Also, some more Ginny/Harry. If it's in this category, both couples have to be closely related to the plot!

Author's Response: Ha, with my speed, who knows? It might really be the neverending fanfic. Thanks for reviewing; means a lot.

Reviewer: m2m
Date: 08/15/10 20:47
Chapter: Funeral

This is a very nice story. Yes, Hermione is out of character in the beginning but you did a good job showing how events led her to become someone who was unrecognizable. I like the contrast between molly and mrs sanford, contrasting who hermione was and who she's become. It reminds me of the song stars and the moon by jason robert brown. In the song, a girl falls in love with a man who promises her stars and the moon but marries a man who can give her a yacht and champagn and she is unhappy and realizes she'll never have the moon.

I do think the story drags a bit at times. Also, i would like to see more Ron. However, nice job and i look forward to the ending.

Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I completely agree; it drags so much at times that I want to pick it up and run with it.

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