Reviewer: potterdude94
Date: 01/13/08 7:46
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

GOOD JOB! I liked this chapter... you can feel Michael's vibes more.... by the way, i am cured of "cliffhanger poisoning". It sure did take a while though!

Author's Response: I'm happy you recovered. :)

Reviewer: hermy_91
Date: 01/12/08 22:08
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

This is a very good chapter
Thx for writing

Author's Response: Thx for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 01/12/08 19:18
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

I'm so glad you finally posted! That was a brilliant chapter! I still think Hermione and Ron need to get over themselves, realize they love each other and get married, but Hermione's pregnant and Ron has a girlfriend. Things do not look good.

But I have my hopes.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Claudia Macmillan
Date: 01/12/08 18:54
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

I want to explain myself better. When I said that I expected more what I wanted to say is that it was so good that when I was done I couldn't believe that that was all; I wanted to keep reading but there was nothing else to read...

Reviewer: Claudia Macmillan
Date: 01/12/08 18:43
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

It is a good chapter but, honestly, I expected more... I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 01/12/08 17:51
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

ok well i just reviewed but i will do so again! i think that your writing is getting better and better! i know the big break is coming soon - you've been doing a really good job of showing that hermione is starting to regret marrying michael. on the other hand you are also doing a great job portraying hermione - she is much too kind to just leave michael on a whim!

my favourite part of the entire story so far - "i love michael but i'm in love with ron." finally, she admits it to herself!!

wow two long reviews...... KEEP WRITING!

Author's Response: Oh God... I love your reviews! They make me feel so happy now that I'm back! :P Thanks so much for saying so many nice things about my writing... I was beginning to doubt myself.

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 01/12/08 17:46
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

great chapter - i can't wait for the next one!!
i can't wait 'till the moment where hermione realizes michael to be the lying cheating ba***rd he really is.... great use of dramatic irony! i also can't wait 'till hermione and ron get back together... and i know they will.
you know, with each passing chapter i get more angry and frustrated at hermione for always forgiving michael when he gives her a few sweet words.... even so i still have to keep reading!! great story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for sticking by! I know Hermione always forgives Michael, but you gotta admit, those were some pretty sweet words. ;)

Reviewer: Mugglebrn
Date: 01/12/08 17:24
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

YAY!!! Welcome Back! I am so happy to have this story to read again!

Author's Response: It's good to be back!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 12/23/07 16:00
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

I love this story!! and i can't help getting mad at how thick hermione is!!!
please hurry with the next chapter!

Reviewer: Silver Whisper
Date: 12/18/07 8:12
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

have you tried perhaps creating a different account? i know alot of authors are having trouble with getting stuff on here and alot are going to sites like fanfiction.net

hmm, well i for one think your stories are fantastic and i dont really see why the new chappie was denied. (based on the other chapters)

Author's Response: Thanks. It really means a lot. I'm editing a few things, hoping it won't get rejected again.

Reviewer: Mugglebrn
Date: 12/17/07 21:18
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

I love this story... i just found it a few weeks ago and am waiting ever so patiently for future chapters! How much longer do i have to wait? I am really anxious to see what happens :)

Author's Response: I don't know when it will be posted because MNFF did not approve it.

Reviewer: Silver Whisper
Date: 12/13/07 5:52
Chapter: Appointments and Engagements

hey...you changed the name of harry and ginny's street. i swear it used to be brick lane yes?

Author's Response: Yes, I changed it. You're not insane. I just like that Beatles song so much...

Reviewer: Silver Whisper
Date: 12/13/07 4:35
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

oh.my.god

NEW CHAPTER

Thankyou so much!

Author's Response: You are so welcome! I feel so happy!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 12/02/07 15:39
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

omg!!!!! is the beta thing done already. ahhhhh!! i cant wait. i cant wait. i cant wait!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

Author's Response: Not yet, but I can't wait either!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 12/02/07 15:39
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

omg!!!!! is the beta thing done already. ahhhhh!! i cant wait. i cant wait. i cant wait!! ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!

Reviewer: hermy_91
Date: 12/01/07 13:33
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

Plz update soon.

Author's Response: CHAPTER TEN IS DONE! Expect it soon.

Reviewer: eternityzangel
Date: 11/24/07 23:31
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

i caaan't waaaait *wails*

pls update soon i'm acting like freaking dudly here

-ea

Author's Response: Expect it soon. ;)

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 11/19/07 18:50
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

duude. ur like killing me here. i wanna kno what happens next. ahhh!!! and i have a question. do u kno how many chapters this tsories gonna take?? love love ur story!!

Author's Response: I just came out of the hospital, so all the work I was hoping to do this weekend had to be postponed. Good news is, however, I'm very close to finishing this chapter. I'm not sure how many chapters the story is going to have, but I think I'll have a better idea by the time I post chapter ten. I really, REALLY want to post it soon... You have no idea of what I have in store *laughs evilly* I miss reading your comments and thoughts! Thanks for sticking by all this time!

Reviewer: Silver Whisper
Date: 11/14/07 0:03
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

so...i love this story so much! do you have any updates for us on how things are going??

Author's Response: I'm almost done writing! As soon as I type the last period you can be sure that I'll send this to my beta and as soon as she returns it, I'll post it. I really miss receiving all of your reviews so I'm looking forward to reading your thoughts on chapter ten! Thank you sooooooo much for all you patience!

Reviewer: marialita
Date: 11/13/07 20:21
Chapter: The Right Decision?

ok that's it. I'm dying here!! I need to read more. Plzzz update sooon

Author's Response: I will! I will! I have a term paper due tomorrow so that's why the wait has been so long. As soon as I'm free I plan to dedicate all my time to finishing the chapter!

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