Reviewer: lily_potterx3
Date: 02/04/08 21:59
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

omg. i love it. i love any romance stories! this kind of reminds me of the notebook. i dont know if you have heard of that book (and/or movie) the things is i cant read the last chapter =[ its keeps saying "Access denied. This story has not been validated by the adminstrators of this site." can you fix it somehow? i really want to finish reading =]

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! The Notebook always makes me cry my eyes out.... The reason you can't access the second part of chapter ten is that I submitted it but the moderators have not gone over it yet. Once they read it and decide it's okay, then you should be able to read it.

Reviewer: lily_potterx3
Date: 02/04/08 21:59
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

omg. i love it. i love any romance stories! this kind of reminds me of the notebook. i dont know if you have heard of that book (and/or movie) the things is i cant read the last chapter =[ its keeps saying "Access denied. This story has not been validated by the adminstrators of this site." can you fix it somehow? i really want to finish reading =]

Reviewer: Meralie
Date: 02/02/08 16:01
Chapter: The Wedding of the Year

yes yes, its hard not to be nice when your work is so good.
I LOVE the story, and, although I am not seeing as much Ron/Hermione as I wish I would, I will wait for the right time and keep my patience. I really like how you write so much, the chapters are really descriptive but not boring, and I really enjoy the plot. But please, let Michael get hit by something very large soon.
Lotsa Luv and Good Luck

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Just be patient and you'll see more of Ron very soon. ;)

Reviewer: Cooper7
Date: 02/01/08 12:22
Chapter: Happy New Year

This is such a lovely story! But Oh NO! How's she meant to get back with Ron now she's pregnant :O I guess I'll have to read on ;)
xxxx

Author's Response: Yes, do read! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Miss Ravenclaw
Date: 01/30/08 20:09
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

When I saw there was another chapter, I screamed. Thank goodness my family was upstairs and my scream wasn't /that/ loud. xD
Anne's great. I wish she'd help Hermione come to her senses, though. This just isn't the Hermione we know. She doesn't actually love Micheal. We all know she loves Ron. =)
I can't wait for part two! You did a great job with this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much! :P

Reviewer: love_44
Date: 01/28/08 23:13
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

i just love this chapter! u are amzing and i really enjoy reading this story(:

Author's Response: Thanks very much! This is one of the nicest birthday presents I've gotten!

Reviewer: PianosAngel
Date: 01/23/08 13:51
Chapter: Regrets

Hermione better kick some stanford ass soon.......

Author's Response: I don't promise anything.

Reviewer: PianosAngel
Date: 01/23/08 13:42
Chapter: Falling Apart

OMG NO! Poor Ron! I almost want Hermione to have an abortion! Now! What could possiably happen next? Must read on.....

Author's Response: It's not the poor child's fault!

Reviewer: PianosAngel
Date: 01/23/08 13:31
Chapter: Happy New Year

AGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! No, she can't be!!! And wow, nice scripting with Ron and Mollly.

Author's Response: Nice twist, huh?

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 01/19/08 18:22
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

Great, so he comes home with flowers and a few days later they’re sleeping together again, Anne thought indignantly, taking a sip of her coffee as she looked away.


i love anne. smart smart girl. haha. your story is amazing. it just gets better and better. i just wonder when the climax will arise. ahhhh. it kills me. please keep writing:]

Author's Response: I'll keep writing. Just keep reading. ;)

Reviewer: missgranger37
Date: 01/19/08 17:34
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

If you wrote chapter 10 and cut it into two different parts, then why is part one the only one here! You can't just stop! I dedicated the last 3 1/2 hours of my day to reading this!

Author's Response: Thank you for dedicating so much of your time to this story! I know part two is still not up, but I got it back from my beta a few days ago and I haven't had the time to go over it yet. I promise I'll post it soon.

Reviewer: moldy999
Date: 01/17/08 17:34
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

get them back together NOW quickly

Author's Response: No pressure, right? Lol...

Reviewer: Harry_Potter_Mom
Date: 01/15/08 9:27
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

Excellent story thus far! I don't typically read uncompleted stories (as I am dreadfully impatient for the next chapters ... LOL) but am happy to have gotten in on this one. Please update soon!!!!!


Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope you won't have to wait much longer for part two!

Reviewer: Pandapoo
Date: 01/14/08 16:26
Chapter: Appointments and Engagements

You're right, here I am writting you a review. I am really into this story, all I can say is that i hope it has the right ending. I love your style of writing, very unique. You have done Harry Potter World Proud.
Thankyou

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm blushing... I hope you like what's coming up next!

Reviewer: Silver Whisper
Date: 01/14/08 10:02
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

oh wow, it was awesome!! so exciting...but why aren't hermione and ron back together yet? i dont think micheal is going to stay so "nice". they never do.
anyway, thanks for updating, i seriously had the worst day today and you made it all better!

Author's Response: You're welcome. And what you say is true: they never do. ;)

Reviewer: westwinggirl09
Date: 01/13/08 14:42
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

Fabulous chapter!!! I'm so glad you're back! I hope you update soon and I just can't wait for the moment when ron and hermione finally get back together!!!! hopefully we don't have to wait that long...

Author's Response: Thanks! I promise I'll update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: eternityzangel
Date: 01/13/08 14:24
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

thankyou for updating!
your story is amazing!

-ea

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 01/13/08 14:22
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

You did it!!! YAY! IT took so long, but I know it was worth it! I know everyone will just love this chapter...just wait until you see the next one! Great job!! I can't wait to get the next chapter! *poke*

~Jess

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jess!!!!

Reviewer: potterdude94
Date: 01/13/08 7:46
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

GOOD JOB! I liked this chapter... you can feel Michael's vibes more.... by the way, i am cured of "cliffhanger poisoning". It sure did take a while though!

Author's Response: I'm happy you recovered. :)

Reviewer: hermy_91
Date: 01/12/08 22:08
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part One)

This is a very good chapter
Thx for writing

Author's Response: Thx for reviewing. :)

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