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Name: rather_be_athogwarts (Signed) · Date: 06/30/08 6:22 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
that was amazing. "You just never meant to get caught." that is exactly true!!! to tell you the truth, i really should hate patricia right now but, you know.... michael finally got what he deserved!!!! i love how hermione finally admits to herself that she knew all along that michael was cheating. you portrayed hermione perfectly! it would be just like her to always see the best in people in people - how she decided to ignore the rumors and trust michael. and how she would be extremely mad at michael!! i knew that she wasn't SO dumb to accept michael's
“I never meant for any of this to happen. I never meant to hurt you, Hermione.”

i have been waiting for this moment so long! you did a great job! the way hermione thinks of something ron says when she's mad at michael - who else would she think of? well done. now all we're missing is the spectacular ron-hermione reunion! no pressure though ;-) i can't wait to see how you tackle the whole situation with claudia - i'm starting to love her and i want her to be happy!

for the i don't know whatth time, GREAT FIC!!
i always wait with bated breath for the next chapter!! keep writing!!

And I’m not going to hurt my marriage anymore. She doesn’t deserve this.”
haha. if it were me, i would have called this chapter TOO LITTLE, TOO LATE! ;-)

Author's Response: "Too Little, Too Late," is a great title! I might actually use it for a future chapter, who knows?

Thank you so much for reviewing. It means the world to me. I loved your comments; you just showed me how much you liked it!!

About that "spectacular Ron-Hermione reunion"... It might take a while. :) But since you said "no pressure"...

Name: rosemerta (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 18:32 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
i knew he was having an affair with susan! why else would rebecca always need to take over? but hermione is wrong. patricia must have sent susan away not michael. she probably threatened susan about knowing and susan didnt realize patricia's motive. at least thats my theory. poor jane. i want ron and hermione together but i dont want janes parents to divorce. well jane is a baby who is still very young but i guess ill have to wait and see. very very good chapter. i thought patricia was out of the picture. who knew she was vindictive enough to have photographers trail herself?! evil mastermind . . . the flashback is lovely. michael decided to change but it may be too late. this really showed the complexity of relationships. the age old debate of do you forgive someone for repenting and changing or do you hold their actions against them . . . you cant see the future so do you trust they will cheat again or do you trust that they vow never to any longer?

Author's Response: OMG, I don't want Jane's parents to divorce, either! Finally someone agrees with me! [...] I loved what you said about relationships. You are right.

Name: mrsbrandyc (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 17:28 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
OMG! Please, please, please keep writing this story. I love it. keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Name: Ninaz08 (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 16:44 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
That chapter was freaking awesome. So was Hermione right, did he really have an affiair with Susan, or did he dismise her because she found out about the affair between Michael and Patrica.

Author's Response: Michael had a mini affair with Susan, but he was being completely honest when he said he didn't care about her.

Name: mugglenetaddict813 (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 15:36 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
Oh my goodness! Yeah, I agree with you. This has definitely been my favorite chapter so far too! Wow! I loved the part where Hermione found the photograph of her and Ron, and I loved the flashback too. And I really don't feel sorry for Michael. Really, he had it coming. Although, it did seem that he was trying to change. Anyway, I loved this chapter and I can't wait to read the next one! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for that!

Name: Nostalgic128 (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 14:00 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
As much as I despise cheating, I can't help but feel a teeny bit of pity for Michael. But still, he deserves everything that Hermione decides to do with him. I hope Ron beats him up. lol
But anyways, I really love this chapter, you really capture the feeling of being cheated on.

Author's Response: I felt a LOT of pity for Michael.

Name: SarahW (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 13:41 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
Hurrah - she's woken up at last! Maybe she can start a new life for herself and Jane, as opposed to just be dragged about with no input into her own existence. She’s a laughing stock, colluding in Michael’s bad treatment of her, sticking her head in the sand, giving up her career - I’m surprised she’s still reading books. She’s almost unrecognisable at the moment.

Sadly, this story has gradually turned me against her and against the relationship she could have with Ron. I was startled, in the last chapter, that after keeping away from her for so long, that he suddenly wanted to talk about what could have been. Apparently unconcerned that she’s now married and a mother. That’s almost as self absorbed and silly as Hermione has been throughout.

More and more I think Ron and Claudia belong together. Sorry! Even if they split, he should still avoid his silly ex girlfriend. He could have a happy uncomplicated relationship, with someone who loves him enough to not marry someone else, and reproduce with said git (who’ll now always be part of her life). He’ll always know she chose the appalling Michael over him. (She should have chosen single motherhood over marriage to this moron - he could easily pay all the bills for the baby, and she‘d still have the self respect she lost around about chapter 3)

Still, I'm sure Ron has to swallow his pride and continue to chase the undeserving Hermione, and her baggage. Shame. I’m eagerly waiting the next chapter so I can have another long moan.

Author's Response: Hey, all I'll say is: THEY LOVE EACH OTHER. (Ron and Hermione, that is.)

Name: Beebbop (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 12:51 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
Wow its getting into some sort of oc thing now with Patricia sending those photos. Very Bitchy!! I like it!! Keep it up. Will it be finished soon I want to know what happens in the end.

Author's Response: I never watched the OC, but I'm sure glad you liked this! I'm not sure how long the story has to go but I'll keep you posted.

Name: Dances With Swans (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 11:55 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
so good!!!! michael is such a jerk. grrr he bugs me! cant wiat for the next chap. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Name: Greater_Good_Gellert (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 11:51 · For: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words
Yes!! This chapter was absolutley "brilliant"! I loved it! And, like the last chapter's, it was well worth the wait!
I look so foward to reading the next Chapter... Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: soccerlover4always (Signed) · Date: 06/23/08 20:17 · For: Everything She Needs
You are brillant!! I just don't know how you're going to wrap this up! Good luck! Can't wait to read the next chapter, when you publise it.

Name: soccerlover4always (Signed) · Date: 06/23/08 19:58 · For: Flowers
What?!?!?!? I think that they may accutally be a good couple. Even though she is meant to be with Ron.

Name: soccerlover4always (Signed) · Date: 06/23/08 19:38 · For: Expecting the Unexpected
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's all I can say.

Name: soccerlover4always (Signed) · Date: 06/23/08 19:11 · For: What Lies Ahead (Part Two)
Loved this!!! Maybe Michael isn't that bad. Maybe.

Name: soccerlover4always (Signed) · Date: 06/23/08 16:57 · For: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better
I new Michal was bad news!

Name: soccerlover4always (Signed) · Date: 06/23/08 16:26 · For: The Wedding of the Year
How could you make Hermione marry him?? He is such a jerk! Not to mention he's probably cheating on hear! But this is a good story line.

Name: wingsofathestral (Signed) · Date: 06/23/08 0:52 · For: The Right Decision?
This story is so amazing!!! I absolutely love it...once I started it I couldn't stop. I love all of your characters, it is just such a beautiful story! You writing is so wonderful! I can't wait to read the rest. You should so write a book, I would definatly read it!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Name: Nostalgic128 (Signed) · Date: 06/19/08 15:24 · For: Everything She Needs
oh my....this story is...indescribable.
the characters are so real, like they're real people that someone happened to write about instead of being characters in a made-up story.
I love it so much!
pleasepleaseplease update soon!:D

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 06/17/08 19:57 · For: Everything She Needs
write a book sersly!!!!!

your really goooooood :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! *blushes*

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 06/17/08 19:54 · For: Everything She Needs
ahhhhh. that was so cutee. omg next chapter sooooooon please! ur amazing :)

Author's Response: I love cute. :) I'll update ASAP.

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