Reviewer: SarahW
Date: 06/29/08 13:41
Chapter: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words

Hurrah - she's woken up at last! Maybe she can start a new life for herself and Jane, as opposed to just be dragged about with no input into her own existence. She’s a laughing stock, colluding in Michael’s bad treatment of her, sticking her head in the sand, giving up her career - I’m surprised she’s still reading books. She’s almost unrecognisable at the moment.

Sadly, this story has gradually turned me against her and against the relationship she could have with Ron. I was startled, in the last chapter, that after keeping away from her for so long, that he suddenly wanted to talk about what could have been. Apparently unconcerned that she’s now married and a mother. That’s almost as self absorbed and silly as Hermione has been throughout.

More and more I think Ron and Claudia belong together. Sorry! Even if they split, he should still avoid his silly ex girlfriend. He could have a happy uncomplicated relationship, with someone who loves him enough to not marry someone else, and reproduce with said git (who’ll now always be part of her life). He’ll always know she chose the appalling Michael over him. (She should have chosen single motherhood over marriage to this moron - he could easily pay all the bills for the baby, and she‘d still have the self respect she lost around about chapter 3)

Still, I'm sure Ron has to swallow his pride and continue to chase the undeserving Hermione, and her baggage. Shame. I’m eagerly waiting the next chapter so I can have another long moan.

Author's Response: Hey, all I'll say is: THEY LOVE EACH OTHER. (Ron and Hermione, that is.)

Reviewer: Beebbop
Date: 06/29/08 12:51
Chapter: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words

Wow its getting into some sort of oc thing now with Patricia sending those photos. Very Bitchy!! I like it!! Keep it up. Will it be finished soon I want to know what happens in the end.

Author's Response: I never watched the OC, but I'm sure glad you liked this! I'm not sure how long the story has to go but I'll keep you posted.

Reviewer: Dances With Swans
Date: 06/29/08 11:55
Chapter: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words

so good!!!! michael is such a jerk. grrr he bugs me! cant wiat for the next chap. :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Greater_Good_Gellert
Date: 06/29/08 11:51
Chapter: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words

Yes!! This chapter was absolutley "brilliant"! I loved it! And, like the last chapter's, it was well worth the wait!
I look so foward to reading the next Chapter... Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: soccerlover4always
Date: 06/23/08 20:17
Chapter: Everything She Needs

You are brillant!! I just don't know how you're going to wrap this up! Good luck! Can't wait to read the next chapter, when you publise it.

Reviewer: soccerlover4always
Date: 06/23/08 19:58
Chapter: Flowers

What?!?!?!? I think that they may accutally be a good couple. Even though she is meant to be with Ron.

Reviewer: soccerlover4always
Date: 06/23/08 19:38
Chapter: Expecting the Unexpected

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's all I can say.

Reviewer: soccerlover4always
Date: 06/23/08 19:11
Chapter: What Lies Ahead (Part Two)

Loved this!!! Maybe Michael isn't that bad. Maybe.

Reviewer: soccerlover4always
Date: 06/23/08 16:57
Chapter: Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better

I new Michal was bad news!

Reviewer: soccerlover4always
Date: 06/23/08 16:26
Chapter: The Wedding of the Year

How could you make Hermione marry him?? He is such a jerk! Not to mention he's probably cheating on hear! But this is a good story line.

Reviewer: wingsofathestral
Date: 06/23/08 0:52
Chapter: The Right Decision?

This story is so amazing!!! I absolutely love it...once I started it I couldn't stop. I love all of your characters, it is just such a beautiful story! You writing is so wonderful! I can't wait to read the rest. You should so write a book, I would definatly read it!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Nostalgic128
Date: 06/19/08 15:24
Chapter: Everything She Needs

oh my....this story is...indescribable.
the characters are so real, like they're real people that someone happened to write about instead of being characters in a made-up story.
I love it so much!
pleasepleaseplease update soon!:D

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 06/17/08 19:57
Chapter: Everything She Needs

write a book sersly!!!!!

your really goooooood :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! *blushes*

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 06/17/08 19:54
Chapter: Everything She Needs

ahhhhh. that was so cutee. omg next chapter sooooooon please! ur amazing :)

Author's Response: I love cute. :) I'll update ASAP.

Reviewer: Balletrat17
Date: 06/14/08 21:30
Chapter: Everything She Needs

OMG I had to go back and re-read it it was that amazing!!! Hopefully you can write again soon! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I'm glad my fic was worthy of a re-read!

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 06/14/08 21:02
Chapter: Everything She Needs

hmm, i think i've mentioned this before but whatever. thanks for portraying harry correctly!!!!! i read this : “Harry, I love her. God, I love her so much.” Ron was relieved to finally say the words out loud. Harry patted him on the back and smiled “Well Ron, it’s about time. But don’t sit here and tell me that. Go to her, tell her everything and don’t let her leave without letting her know that you love her. You two are made for each other.”


ok, WHAT?!?! HARRY DOES NOT DO THIS!!!! HARRY DOES NOT SAY THESE THINGS!! i'm sure you share my sentiments. thanks for portraying harry as a man. not a girly freakish person. :P

phew, anger gone :) i can't wait for the next update! i hope your writers black goes away soon!

Author's Response: You are so welcome. ;) I know what you mean; many times I've been tempted to start writing OverlyRomantic!Harry. I know my characters aren't perfect, but some of these fan fics just go too far. Thanks for the review and good wishes. Writer's block slightly lifted.

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 06/14/08 21:02
Chapter: The Right Decision?

hmm, i think i've mentioned this before but whatever. thanks for portraying harry correctly!!!!! i read this : “Harry, I love her. God, I love her so much.” Ron was relieved to finally say the words out loud. Harry patted him on the back and smiled “Well Ron, it’s about time. But don’t sit here and tell me that. Go to her, tell her everything and don’t let her leave without letting her know that you love her. You two are made for each other.”


ok, WHAT?!?! HARRY DOES NOT DO THIS!!!! HARRY DOES NOT SAY THESE THINGS!! i'm sure you share my sentiments. thanks for portraying harry as a man. not a girly freakish person. :P

phew, anger gone :) i can't wait for the next update! i hope your writers black goes away soon!

Reviewer: love_44
Date: 06/12/08 14:36
Chapter: Everything She Needs

loveddddd it:)
ron and hermione are so cute.
keep writing plzzzzz

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Sinner
Date: 06/10/08 22:04
Chapter: Flowers

I was born the same way I was 2 months pre mature and they said I should have died and it was a wonder I servived lol I'm a december too and the staff was low at the time since

Author's Response: So was my lil' sis.

Reviewer: Samank
Date: 06/07/08 3:20
Chapter: The Wedding of the Year

You know that at some point, Hermione is going to find out that Michaels been having an affair. Sorry for the assumptions, it just seems so obvious!

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