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Name: Em1992 (Signed) · Date: 02/26/09 16:25 · For: Failure
what?! whats happening?
aah please please post the next chapter soon.

Author's Response: You'll know soon!

Name: pretzle (Signed) · Date: 02/23/09 3:20 · For: Failure
pleasefinish imbegging.and you write amazingfanfiction.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working hard on the next chapter!

Name: lizziemb (Signed) · Date: 02/06/09 16:29 · For: Failure
You can't keep us in suspense! Much as I don't like Michael, I'm still dying to find out what happened. Really well written fic, thoroughly enjoying it. The characters are very well written and alive - I can feel Hermiones pain and frustration. More of the same please!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you feel that way! Many readers have told me they hate my characterization of Hermione :S I know I haven't updated in forever but please hang in there!

Name: rather_be_athogwarts (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 16:30 · For: Failure
aha :D what i meant by the cheating thing is that is michael was cheating ONLY before they were married and stopped when they did marry, than it would be better because he would have realized that marriage is a serious commitment. :P and i don't hate michael's character that much.... he definitely has his good points! i mostly hate how he makes hermione feel :P

Author's Response: You know, I started writing this with an abnormally large hatred for Michael and now I can't help loving him a tiny bit.

Name: missydee38 (Signed) · Date: 02/04/09 16:26 · For: Failure
love the ending cant wait for more.. Micheal is a butthead,, but i hope Ron helps her so they get back together.. they shouldnt have broken up

Author's Response: haha more will come soon!

Name: Hedwig_is_my_owl (Signed) · Date: 02/03/09 9:57 · For: Failure
Oh goodness...more drama :) Just what I like!!! Update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try!

Name: WelshGreen (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 19:54 · For: Failure
oh my gosh!
you have to update!

what an ending. kudos.(:

i love this fic.
it's one of my favorite.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: Faethe (Signed) · Date: 02/02/09 15:43 · For: Failure
I am so glad for the update! I can't wait to see what happens next. You are evil for having a cliff hanger after waiting so long for an update. Good chapter.

Author's Response: I know I'm evil, but admit it: you love it.

Name: magyk001 (Signed) · Date: 01/28/09 17:54 · For: Failure
WOW! This is an amazing story! I'm happy you finally updated this fic, i have been waiting forever! Please give a new chapter soon! I think the suspense is gunna make me explode!!

Author's Response: I try to speed up the next one!!! Don't explode!

Name: ct143 (Signed) · Date: 01/28/09 16:56 · For: Flowers
this is genius! though I really hate Michael and I LOVE RON!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks!

Name: rather_be_athogwarts (Signed) · Date: 01/28/09 16:26 · For: Failure
and that's definitely the longest review i've ever written!! well, i promise every update you'll be rewarded! :-)

Author's Response: My God; I hope the next review will be this good!

Name: rather_be_athogwarts (Signed) · Date: 01/28/09 16:25 · For: Failure
omg that was massive. i apologize in advance if you're totally lost or confused ;-) and i agree with pottergurl22 that you should write a book! :-)

Author's Response: I love "massive."

Name: rather_be_athogwarts (Signed) · Date: 01/28/09 16:19 · For: Failure
oh man, you're trying to send me over the edge. haha! no joke, i was checking my email and i saw a mugglenet fanfiction update and i when i opened it and saw the title i seriously, in the middle of comtech, totally went OMG OMG OMG!! no joke.
and i read it right then and there. and you're trying to drive me crazy again with your crazy writing skills! i've waited till now to review cuz i want to give you another customary long one! :-)

1. Hermione was a mishap?!?! a MISHAP?!?! ok, so everyone's probably driving you crazy about this one. and then there's this crazy if ron and claudia are really happy together, do i really want to see them hurt. but then, NO! ron and hermione have to be together!!

wait, that made like no sense. moral of the story is, it looks like ron is starting to get over hermione just when she's starting to think about him again cuz michael's jerkness has finally been revealed. AAAAAAAAAAAHH! CONFLICT!!!

2. Michael's jerkness.
YAY! the big revelation was kind of last chapter but i'm happy Hermione is not changing her "i hate michael, why was i so stupid" stance. so yay!
so, in english we were discussing how some people change for the better after they've commited a murder or a really serious crime. That sparked a huge debate about even though some people change, those people still have a bit of 'badness' in them. Like, if they commited a murder out of revenge, they felt 'good' about it after. And, even if they regret their actions later, they still felt that 'goodness' at one time.
SOO that's how i feel about the whole Michael thing. yes, he turned for the better after jane was born. but that does NOT change the fact that he was cheating on Hermione while they were married! while she was in the hospital!!! no. it'd be different if he was a cheater before he married, but no. i personally feel that he should be put in "jail for life" as we would say in english class. in other words, not be allowed to see hermione/jane again without express permission. i know that seems harsh, but he knew the consequences before he cheated and he took advantage of Hermione. so good bye michael. (and of COURSE there's no i want ron and hermione to be together ulterior motive... ;-) )

3. “Hermione,” said Ginny softly, “Michael’s had an accident.”

*sigh* boy when you throw a curve ball, you really strike out. :-P WHAT is Hermione going to do??? she's too good of a person just to not care and let him suffer. wait.... maybe hermione will feel like it's her fault michael got in an accident and get back together with him out of guilt!! NOOO!!!! OMG usually i have some sort of speculation, but not this time!

4. Update soon. or else ;-) just kidding :D but when you do, you can be sure of another MASSIVE review like this one and screaming in tech class!!

5. Conclusion!! So, as I've said countless times, you are a spectacular writer. a lot of times in other fics, i can guess what's going to happen before it does. but with you I have no idea!! what are ron's real feelings for hermione? what will he do if hermione tells him she loves him again? what will happen to claudia? how far have she and ron gone? what happened to michael? will michael and hermione ever make up? how will hermione react to michael's accident? will ginny ever tell hermione that she knew about michael cheating all along? how will hermione react to that information? where does harry come in to all this? will there EVER be a happily ever after for ron and hermione????

omg. you drive me crazy. but that's why i love this fic SOOOOOOOO much! keep up the STELLER, GREAT, and SUPERB work!!

I'm on tenterhooks until you update again! ;-
Always, Kat.

Author's Response: I'm so so so so happy. Really. No one has ever done this before. I feel very flattered, and I hope you don't get kicked out of tech class for screaming. I LOVE LONG REVIEWS. I, like, adore them. Thanks for taking the time to write all of this!

1. No, no one's mentioned the mishap.

2. I actually like Michael. (I'm kinda in love with him.) I think he's made some mistakes but he finally realized he's been an ass. Oh, and I feel the need to clarify this: Michael WAS cheating before they got married.

3. I have no idea how I came up with that one. But I know it's hard to predict what's going to happen, and that makes me really happy!!

4. I'll try to update as soon as possible. I'm hoping I will get another one of your massive reviews.

5. Again, thanks so much for this. REALLY. :)

Name: Cooper7 (Signed) · Date: 01/27/09 6:15 · For: Failure
Yaaaay you're back and with a very excellent chapter aswell!
Glad you're back :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're still reading!

Name: pottergurl92 (Signed) · Date: 01/27/09 3:35 · For: Failure
omg! amazing! fantastic!

i abs. love this stroy.
it just get's better and better every chapter.
you should really write like a book.

anyways omg! where's the next chapter.
17! 17! where are you 17!

-and anyways if i could ask you one thing:
how many chapters does this story have?
it's okay if you dont want to say it to keep the story going and to drive me crazy :)

Author's Response: OMG Thank You! Thank You! I want to write a book, I just haven't had an idea that's good enough. And the next chapter is in my head. Stay tuned. And I'm not sure how many chapters I'll end up with (I swear I'm not trying to drive you crazy!) but I know that we have at least four coming up. :D

Name: Mugglebrn (Signed) · Date: 01/26/09 20:55 · For: The Right Decision?
I check every day to see if this story gets updated and I was THRILLLED to see a new chapter last week.. I've read it several times already and have reread the other chapters more than i can count. You are a very gifted writer and if you are not taking composition or journalism in your studies, you should be. Keep up the awesome work and I hope the love of Twilight won't cause too long of a delay again :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this, really. I'm touched!!! (I'm actually a journalism student minoring in literature, haha.) :D And I'm learning to balance my love for Edward Cullen and Harry Potter, so don't worry. ;)

Name: mugglenetaddict813 (Signed) · Date: 01/25/09 18:29 · For: Failure
Oh my word! What an ending! Do you know this is the first story I read on Mugglenet, and it is definitely still my favorite. I think you have done such a fabulous job throughout this story of creating characters that we can really love, hate, cheer for, etc. And Michael's character is especially well-written because he has so many internal conflicts and flaws. Anyway, back to the chapter, it flows beautifully from the other chapters and you do a really nice job of conveying the confusion and grief of Hermione. I really liked the ending too! I actually gasped when I read that part! :) Keep writing! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: :D I am so glad you like it so much!! I am very flattered. I'll keep writing but you keep reading!

Name: Spoony (Signed) · Date: 01/24/09 5:29 · For: Failure
so very excited for this chapter....I've missed this story so much. I am half way thru becuase I want to give it the attention it deserves- but keep going with it please- cheers

Author's Response: :) Thanks so much. I'll keep going, I promise.

Name: mahogany_wand (Signed) · Date: 01/23/09 19:31 · For: Failure
OMGodric, a cliffie! The suspense will kill us! So update soon, hear me?! Good chapter, though! :)

Author's Response: I hear you! Thank you!

Name: lovespotter17 (Signed) · Date: 01/23/09 16:10 · For: Failure
OMG!!! this chapter was REALLY GOOD!! u have no idea how long i have been waiting for an update!!!
u are truly an amazing writer and i hope u update soon!
i really don't like michael, but he doesn't need to get hurt

Author's Response: I am SO SORRY you've been waiting so much. Thanks! I'll try to update as soon as I can.

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