Reviewer: Feather Hawkins
Date: 01/26/07 23:49
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Deal
not to be annoying, but straight A's should be straight O's for Outstanding. I think that Remus and Sirius should switch places in this chap.
4 stars out of 5
Author's Response: Switching places in what sense--like actually switching bodies, or what?!?! I'm not quite sure I understand your suggestion. Maybe you can explain it to me!!! Thanks for the star rating!
Love, Cutie!
Reviewer: Feather Hawkins
Date: 01/26/07 23:49
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Deal
not to be annoying, but straight A's should be straight O's for Outstanding. I think that Remus and Sirius should switch places in this chap.
4 stars out of 5
Author's Response: OK
but i don't know what you mean by switching places.
thanx, anyway!
Reviewer: Nomugglegirl
Date: 01/21/07 20:58
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Deal
WRITE ...WANT MORE!!!! BLOODY HELL WANT MORES
Author's Response: Wow! I've never gotten a review like that in all of my writing career!!! ok, ok! I'll get a move on. just chill out, and it'll go faster. I promise!!!
Thanks for the exhilerated review!!!
Reviewer: Padfoot101
Date: 01/16/07 20:12
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Deal
what happened to nikki? and why didnt lucy with lily during the train ride?
besides that its a good story.
Author's Response: I have had people tell me about Nikki before in reviews, and I really don't know what happened to her. I'll fix it soon. When I go back and fix all the changes that people have given me after the fic is done. So yes, when I update it, I will fix that detail.
Also, I'm not sure what you mean about Lucy. I didn't have a Lucy in my story--I have Nikki, Savanna, and Lily. That's it. I checked, and I think you are mistaken. But that's fine.
Thanks for the compliment! Don't worry, a chapter will be up in a bit!
Reviewer: 99clouds
Date: 01/16/07 17:17
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Deal
you know what I really hate? is when you find a really good story (a.k.a yours) and it's not finished please get a new chapter up
thanks!!!!! **** :)
Author's Response: I know exactly where you're coming from. I read stuff like that all the time and i used to constantly check to see if the next chapter was up. Yes, and my advice is to only read completed stories. But w/e. lol
that's just so funny--cause i do the same thing!
thanks for the comments!
Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 01/15/07 23:55
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Deal
Mwahaha! A kiss!
Lily will stop the denial.
Author's Response: i know
I love it. if you liked that, then *hint, hint* you'll love the next chapters. not exactly the next one, but coming up. they're great!
Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 01/15/07 23:53
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Deal
What happened to Nikki?
But great fanfic! Can't wait for update.
Author's Response: Just for you, I'll make sure she's in chapter 3. thanks for the great eye for details!
Reviewer: HPMathNerd
Date: 01/15/07 21:53
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Deal
It's good, and you should keep going with it...
(But, for the record, " straight A's " in Hogwarts is all "Acceptables", not Exceeds Expectations or Outstandings)
Author's Response: Thanks
clearly, you get the main idea that I was going for. and i'll add that to my mental note. thanks for the comment!
Reviewer: green eyed cat
Date: 01/15/07 18:53
Chapter: Chapter 2: The Deal
Hahaha, I love A Walk TO Remember!
Good story, I cant wait to see the rest!!!!
Author's Response: thanx
i have a feeling a lot of people will like the next chapter. its really good
can't wait for ur responses to it.
check out my new fic--a kiss can change it all!
Author's Response: A Kiss Can Change It All isn't up yet, but will be in the next few weeks!!!
Reviewer: books 4 ever
Date: 10/25/06 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 1: Nothing Seems Worthy
Wow it's really good. Keep the chapters going! I really like it. I cant wait for more! ;)
Author's Response: Don't worry; I'm writing a lot, now that I'm on my break for Christmas. Mugglenet's kinda slow, though, when it comes to submitting stuff. It'll be a while, but I'll have a chapter up in the next couple weeks. Sorry!
Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 08/15/06 10:41
Chapter: Chapter 1: Nothing Seems Worthy
maybe james should just snog her rite then and there...
Author's Response: I would love to have that happen, but it would be too soon. I want you all to get the info down first that I want to be portrayed. It'll happen, just not yet.
Reviewer: Iwishiwern Tamuggle
Date: 08/13/06 19:20
Chapter: Chapter 1: Nothing Seems Worthy
i like it
Author's Response: I'm glad. Thanks for the support! New chapters should be up soon!
Cutiepoet
Reviewer: songchic_siruslover
Date: 08/13/06 17:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: Nothing Seems Worthy
This is a good start I hope u write more soon!!!
Author's Response: I added the next chapter, and i am sorry to say that i will be adding a new fanfic to my queue soon! *i don't think i spelled that right* but anyway, i'll do my best to get a new one up asap!!!
Reviewer: AnnaLily89
Date: 08/13/06 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: Nothing Seems Worthy
Good start, and it's really well written, it flows so well. Keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response: awww!
thanks, i'm so glad you like it.
new chapters will be up soon!
Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 08/13/06 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: Nothing Seems Worthy
wow. lily's naughty . CAN'T WAIT TOO READ THE OTHER CHAPTERS!
Author's Response: I just have to say--I'm laughing out loud, here! Thanks for the great review, and the sarcasm! New chapters should be up soon!
Cutiepoet
