I never thought about how tough it would be for Fleur. They are all just jealous. She did show them, and she got the guy. Unless Jo has planned tragedy for the wedding.
Hey, Chris! Great story and great idea, too. I really liked the fact that you didn't paint Fleur as the popular girl, which is how her character is usually typecast.
I did notice a small mistake at the end in the third-to-last paragraph -
"The carraige was very close to the ground now, amd she could see the trees in the distance. They were not frienly, wizened trees."
The spelling errors for And and Friendly were the only mistakes I noticed. Keep writing! I love reading your fics!
- Jacie the Cat
Author's Response: Jace! Thanks for reviewing :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story :D The mistakes are in the end because I added that part before posting the story, and my beta didn't get to see them :D
Thanks for the review :)
Chris, who is off to correct some mistakes
I really enjoyed reading this--I had never really thought about how it might be difficult to be part Veela. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) I'm glad you like the story :D Chris
Ooh... this looks good. Please write another chapter soon. I like how you put this story in Fleur's view before the Triwiz. Tournament. I like it because she's not mentioned a whole bunch in the GOF. However, the beginning was a little confusing to me, but I still liked your story!
Author's Response: The story is finished... that's all there is. I wrote it for a challene on the Beta Boards :) Won points for it, too :D I'm glad you liked it :) I'd consider more chapters... but I have no idea on how to properly write Fleur.
Chris, who already has two major projects that he needs to pay attention to
go fleur! this is the first fic i have ever read that was only about fleur. i luv it. this is also the first time i have ever liked fleur. wow umust be good
Author's Response: Haha thanks for the reivew :D Chris