Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 02/06/07 13:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was really good. I liked all of the great twists you threw in there. I like the joke about the ''quality wool" for the sweaters. Good to see the Twins interested in the Horcrux Hunt. Great job!


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Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/10/06 15:08
Chapter: Chapter 1

Using the Dementors to suck out the twins' souls and switch bodies was very original! It was also interesting to see Fred and George participate in the upcoming Horcrux hunt. Good luck in the challenge!
~Gina :)

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 08/09/06 12:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like the way you had the Dementors pull them out and they switched while they were disembodied! That is a very original idea. I'm also glad you showed how they are two distinct people. RAB was an interesting twist. :)

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 08/09/06 8:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like it! Good job!

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