great job! i was browsing through your stories and this one really caught my eye. I've never read anything about Verity before...very original.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, accio_firebolt! Out of all of my stories, this is probably the one I'm the least proud of (written in about five seconds for a contest entry) so I'm glad you like it. Thanks again!
I've never seen a fic about Verity, but ever since I first read about her, she's always bugged me. I just can't help but think she'll come up in Book 7. Anyway, good fic.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I've always felt the same way about her. Thanks for the review!
awww, cute story. i liked it. very simple, and great. definitley write more..although, i always imagined fred and george both equally into the making of the stuff, and into making the business work. however, i still enjoyed this story alot.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Quiditch fan. Yep, I took some liberities with the facts, but as a twin, I HATE the idea of how Fred and George are both exactly identical. Anyway, thanks for the review!
Nice job! That was very original! You write very well, the description was great. Good luck in the challenge!! ~Gina :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Gina! Congradulation on coming in second in the challenge. Thank you so much for the review!
I really like how you distinguished between the two twins personalities. I think that there would be more visible differences then one freckle, but I totally enjoyed this story. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cheshlin. Actually, the one freckle thing is slightly accurate- I have an identical twin sister and the only real difference between us physically (if we wore our hair the same, which we don't) is that I have a huge birthmark on my leg and my sister doesn't. Also, it says in the books that Fred and George looked identical to the last freckle. Anyway, thanks for the review!