Reviews For The Ties that Bind
Reviewer: accio_firebolt
Date: 08/25/06 22:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

great job! i was browsing through your stories and this one really caught my eye. I've never read anything about Verity before...very original.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, accio_firebolt! Out of all of my stories, this is probably the one I'm the least proud of (written in about five seconds for a contest entry) so I'm glad you like it. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Potter_freak0515
Date: 08/17/06 5:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

I've never seen a fic about Verity, but ever since I first read about her, she's always bugged me. I just can't help but think she'll come up in Book 7. Anyway, good fic.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I've always felt the same way about her. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 08/11/06 9:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

awww, cute story. i liked it. very simple, and great. definitley write more..although, i always imagined fred and george both equally into the making of the stuff, and into making the business work. however, i still enjoyed this story alot.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Quiditch fan. Yep, I took some liberities with the facts, but as a twin, I HATE the idea of how Fred and George are both exactly identical. Anyway, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/10/06 11:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi,
Nice job! That was very original! You write very well, the description was great. Good luck in the challenge!! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Gina! Congradulation on coming in second in the challenge. Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 08/09/06 12:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really like how you distinguished between the two twins personalities. I think that there would be more visible differences then one freckle, but I totally enjoyed this story. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Cheshlin. Actually, the one freckle thing is slightly accurate- I have an identical twin sister and the only real difference between us physically (if we wore our hair the same, which we don't) is that I have a huge birthmark on my leg and my sister doesn't. Also, it says in the books that Fred and George looked identical to the last freckle. Anyway, thanks for the review!

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