Reviews For On My Own
Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 08/31/06 16:17
Chapter: On My Own

*Is really, really sorry about submitting 5 times. My comp. was going slow and I kept clicking, and well.....*

Author's Response: that's OK, I always do that!!

Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 08/31/06 16:15
Chapter: On My Own

YEAH!! A fic from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Must say I luuuuurved the ending!!!!! And the entire fic ;)!

One criticism: When Sirius is thinking about going to the Potter's and he tells himself he won't be a freeloader, I think it is a little unrealistic. I don't think, given the dramatic circumstances, that that particular issue really would have been on his mind. But what do I know ;D. (not meant sarcastically).

Author's Response: Hey, thankyou!! So happy you like the ending, I had trouble with it!! I see what you mean about the freeloader thing.

Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 08/31/06 16:15
Chapter: On My Own

YEAH!! A fic from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Must say I luuuuurved the ending!!!!! And the entire fic ;)!

One criticism: When Sirius is thinking about going to the Potter's and he tells himself he won't be a freeloader, I think it is a little unrealistic. I don't think, given the dramatic circumstances, that that particular issue really would have been on his mind. But what do I know ;D. (not meant sarcastically).

Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 08/31/06 16:15
Chapter: On My Own

YEAH!! A fic from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Must say I luuuuurved the ending!!!!! And the entire fic ;)!

One criticism: When Sirius is thinking about going to the Potter's and he tells himself he won't be a freeloader, I think it is a little unrealistic. I don't think, given the dramatic circumstances, that that particular issue really would have been on his mind. But what do I know ;D. (not meant sarcastically).

Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 08/31/06 16:15
Chapter: On My Own

YEAH!! A fic from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Must say I luuuuurved the ending!!!!! And the entire fic ;)!

One criticism: When Sirius is thinking about going to the Potter's and he tells himself he won't be a freeloader, I think it is a little unrealistic. I don't think, given the dramatic circumstances, that that particular issue really would have been on his mind. But what do I know ;D. (not meant sarcastically).

Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 08/31/06 16:15
Chapter: On My Own

YEAH!! A fic from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Must say I luuuuurved the ending!!!!! And the entire fic ;)!

One criticism: When Sirius is thinking about going to the Potter's and he tells himself he won't be a freeloader, I think it is a little unrealistic. I don't think, given the dramatic circumstances, that that particular issue really would have been on his mind. But what do I know ;D. (not meant sarcastically).

Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 08/31/06 16:15
Chapter: On My Own

YEAH!! A fic from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Must say I luuuuurved the ending!!!!! And the entire fic ;)!

One criticism: When Sirius is thinking about going to the Potter's and he tells himself he won't be a freeloader, I think it is a little unrealistic. I don't think, given the dramatic circumstances, that that particular issue really would have been on his mind. But what do I know ;D. (not meant sarcastically).

Reviewer: Hpfanofmarauders
Date: 08/31/06 16:15
Chapter: On My Own

YEAH!! A fic from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Must say I luuuuurved the ending!!!!! And the entire fic ;)!

One criticism: When Sirius is thinking about going to the Potter's and he tells himself he won't be a freeloader, I think it is a little unrealistic. I don't think, given the dramatic circumstances, that that particular issue really would have been on his mind. But what do I know ;D. (not meant sarcastically).

Reviewer: Medora
Date: 08/09/06 16:32
Chapter: On My Own

aw. that makes me want to cry. i really like how sirius WAS close to regulus at one time, that they had a brothership.

Author's Response: Thanks!! I always thought they would've been close, untill Sirius went to Hogwarts at least.

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 08/08/06 18:51
Chapter: On My Own

awesome! I guess I don't really have any crit for you, so...

I loved the song that went along with the tale. It goes perfectly with the storyline! My also liked how you layed out the Sirius/Regulus relationship. I think that it's really cool that sirius used to protect him, and once reg didn't need it any longer, sirius left. It also gave good reason for the whole Regulus is a death eater senerio. My favorite part is the very last line--He'd escaped prison twice. Very powerful, and very cool. :-)

Author's Response: Hey thanks!! I love Regulus, I'm actually working on a story about why he became a Death Eater (I think it may have something to do with him being jealous of sirius) I had a lot of trouble with the ending, so I'm really glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: purplepanther
Date: 08/08/06 15:20
Chapter: On My Own

You wrote it very well! It's a good story

Author's Response: Thanks!

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