This so hilarious overall that it's easy to miss the excellent little funny bits. Anyway, amazing work! :)
That was a very funny story. It would be very interesting to see how poor Ron and Ginny manage a day as each other. The twins are at least the same sex!! hehe Thanks for the entertainment!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought I had less humor than I had initially wanted. I agree that it would be interesting to see how Ron and Ginny would manage a day as each other, but I think I will leave that open for you to imagine how they would handle it. Thanks for the review!
Great ending! And good use of a line from SS. ;) I liked your invention for the body swap, the Creature Converter. I noticed you left things open for a sequel (I did the same thing) - so are you going to write the twins' revenge next?? Good job - and good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, but no, I don't plan on writing a sequel. Thanks for reviewing!