This is a great fic! It is getting better and better! PLEASE update soon! Keep up the good work!
This is a good fic, I like it a lot which is rare unless it's novel length. Anyway, great job and I hope you update soon!
It's getting better and better! Can't wait to see what happens!
very good story! keep up the good work :-)
This one was good! but i do get the feeling it was sort of a filler that was sorta boring but had to be there right? lol neways keep up the good work!
OMG you reeeeeally need to write more!!! Have you thought about quizilla the readers there would eat this stuff up! i could even reccomend you on my quizzes i usualy get about 50 readers in a month :D
Author's Response: Wow, really, you'd do that? I guess I'd nver really thought about it...I know these chapters are short, but it is just the beginging, and the ones that are that way are for "dramatic effect." (Oooo, aaaaaaaah, lol, wow that was corny.) Ok now that I've rambled on and on and on and on and--oh alright, thanks for reveiwing!
Aww, I want to read more. Post a chapter up soon please.
Author's Response: I'll try. thanks for reveiwing.
My interest is peaked. Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: My first reveiw! I'm so touched!