Reviews For Roses Of Yesterday
Reviewer: michelleking
Date: 12/16/07 2:37
Chapter: Prologue

No!!! Don't stop there! :(

Reviewer: Dark_Side
Date: 09/02/07 19:38
Chapter: The Graveyard

more more faster faster!!!

Reviewer: darmy
Date: 04/01/07 6:41
Chapter: The Graveyard

eeexxxeeellleeennnttt

Reviewer: chrissy_coo_coo
Date: 03/12/07 22:11
Chapter: The Graveyard

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo!!!!!!!!!!!! The suspense is killing me! GReat cliff! Keep up this great writing and update soon pleaz!
-chrissy

Reviewer: Lady Nienna
Date: 10/05/06 11:55
Chapter: The Graveyard

gah! aren't you gonna finish:)

Reviewer: vikkidragon
Date: 09/04/06 20:23
Chapter: The Graveyard

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!

Reviewer: master_p0494
Date: 07/11/06 22:54
Chapter: The Graveyard

Love it, Love it, LOVE IT!!!!! keep writing!!!

Reviewer: GinnyWantToBe
Date: 07/09/06 19:56
Chapter: The Graveyard

"love the cliffy" said dripping with sarcasom

Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 05/02/06 15:16
Chapter: The Graveyard

you haven't updated in forever!!!

Reviewer: rosepetals
Date: 04/19/06 1:13
Chapter: The Graveyard

r u kidding me? no more? i hate cliff hangerss!!!
well anyways amazing story!!!!!

Reviewer: slumbery_sunshine1
Date: 03/07/06 0:59
Chapter: The Graveyard

Good story! I love it so far, write some more! Quick!

Reviewer: Blondeshorte88
Date: 10/08/05 21:28
Chapter: The Graveyard

I just finished reading ur story! I luv it! Very evil ending, I hope no one dies, I won't be able to take it! lol It's also romantic of course. Update soon!

Reviewer: cloudybear
Date: 09/06/05 18:40
Chapter: The Graveyard

gggggggrrrrrrr evil cliffe! COME ON, I'm dying here!

Reviewer: dreaming
Date: 09/06/05 14:16
Chapter: The Graveyard

ahhhhhh need to read more!!! thanx for putting me in your authors note! ;)

Reviewer: midwife_witch
Date: 09/05/05 22:04
Chapter: The Graveyard

It feels like there's a chapter missing here that explains how Harry wound up at the graveyard. And Voldemort spends way too much time explaining himself. This slows down the really strong lead-up you had coming into this chapter.

Reviewer: midwife_witch
Date: 09/05/05 21:56
Chapter: Betrayal

Very nice! Hermione falls for the kind of trap that usually gets Harry - a very clever twist. And who among us ever really trusted Viktor Krum? Well done!

Reviewer: midwife_witch
Date: 09/05/05 21:52
Chapter: Tea At the Weasley's

Nice ensemble piece - you capture the feel of these four old friends hanging out together quite well. I especially like how you handled Ron: Grown up, but still a bit spastic. :) I didn't really buy Harry's declaration of love, though - it's just too abrupt, and you don't give us enough insight into how he arrives at this conclusion. All in all, though, a good chapter.

Reviewer: midwife_witch
Date: 09/05/05 21:46
Chapter: For Always

A. Harry would never turn down a request for help from Hermione. B. Hermione would never (at least not as of book 6) say someone "didn't have the balls" to do something. This chapter strains the limits of credulity. The ring is a nice touch, though, and helps make sense of your mention of French in the first chapter.

Reviewer: midwife_witch
Date: 09/05/05 21:39
Chapter: Abduction

Have you seen "When Harry Met Sally"? You're probably too young, but this scene has a lot in common with the one where Sally cries on Harry's shoulder after her ex gets engaged. Still lots of proofreading mistakes ("a sleep" instead of "asleep"), but your dialogue captures Harry and Hermione's voices well. Since dialogue is always harder to write than narration, that's a pretty good accomplishment.

Reviewer: midwife_witch
Date: 09/05/05 21:30
Chapter: The Leaky Cauldron

Okay, pretty interesting. So Viktor's back on the scene, eh? Interested to see what you'll do with that. BTW, it's "announced" not "enounced".

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