Reviews For Pleading Guilty
Reviewer: kitcherie
Date: 09/03/06 22:05
Chapter: Pleading Guilty

I liked it. Nice writing style and the way you conveyed what she felt.

Reviewer: Onlyfoolslove
Date: 08/15/06 19:13
Chapter: Pleading Guilty

that was good

Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 08/10/06 10:12
Chapter: Pleading Guilty

Wow. I liked how you interpreted Narsissa through-out the interrogation. How she felt so guilty over what she did -or rather didn't do- that she didn't even try to defend herself against the charges. It really shows how important her family is to her.

My favourite part was the last sentence. It really shows how the personís point of view changes with the single event. Personally, in the beginning it seemed like they were proud of their job and their skills, or at least comfortable with their job. But afterwards they seem to have some amount of regret for what they do. Itís a very interesting concept since they know Narsissa is guiltily of the charges but still feel sorry for her.

Overall, I think you did a wonderful job. It was slightly quick moving, but overall it portrayed a different side of Narsissa. Keep up the wonderful writing!

Author's Response: My first review, EVER! *sniff* Thank you very much. Yeah, I really liked the last sentence too. I was in a very anit-establishment mood then so...

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