I just think you should know i love this story! It's adorable and i've read it upwards of 5 times. So thanks for writing!
Very sweet! I loved this story and Hannah and Draco are a very intresting pairing.
I LOVE Draco/oc fanfics but most of the time they're not very beileveable, this has got to be the best one by far, you done it really well x
I'm currently trying to write a Hannah/Draco fic when they are older. This story the only one, so far, which I could find. It was a really great read :)
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Written well written, i thought ir was really good xx
Perfect....I loved it! especially the playful Draco..
Very interesting storyline. It's a 'rarepair', Draco and Hannah, but makes for a nice plot. I like how you change POVs throughout -- it really gives a nice idea of what each character is thinking. However, sometimes it became confusing. Perhaps not switching POVs in one chapter, but rather alternating? Also, make sure lines of dialogue are separated. When a new person is speaking, there needs to be a new line of text. Overall, I enjoyed this new pairing. I've never read it before!
Well, it was a bit confusing, just some of the times when I read both sides of the story. And you should put different sentences of dialouge on different lines with a space between them. It just makes it seem a bit neeter. Other that those few things, it was cute. The summary caught my attention so I read it. Good.
Really great story, wonderfully written! I loved it! Pls, UPDATE it! It's sooo romantic! Definitely one of the best, and it doesn't stick to the boring couples -H/Hr;R/Hr; H/G and so on.. Keep it going ;)
That is the best. romantic and catchy and so self-melting! I love. Finish the sequel before I drop with anxiouty.........seroisly!
awwwwwwwwwwww, that was so sweet!! update soon!
I thought it was really good, except I (personally) have issues with the name Hannah. Good story except in the 1st chapter you could have elaborated more.
aaawww. that was so romantic! i love what happened. update very soon please!!!!
that was so sweet. i love the decription of feelings in this story. its great! keep it up!
awe! it is cute! i love this srotry so much keep it up!
omg its so great! i love the way you put that! keep it up!
WOW. this si so good so far! i love the chemistry between them, it all seems so real! its gonna be interesting to see how they get together...keep it up!
