Reviews For Roses and Fire
Reviewer: LoonyLovegood33
Date: 08/11/06 19:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

hmm, i dont mean to poke holes in the story, but this is rather unsupported and very vauge. i like it but it needs work.

Author's Response: How is it unsupported? I see nothing to support, unless you count the romance, which I thought J.K.R. did a very good job of building up in the books. Thanks for the review anyway.

Reviewer: Pearl_Moon
Date: 08/11/06 12:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. That was very powerful. I cried! this is a fantastic short story, one of the best I have read. Well done and keep writing! 10/10 xxxxx

Author's Response: Wow! One of the best reviews so far! Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Fading
Date: 08/10/06 0:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very good!

Author's Response: Gracias! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: lunalovy
Date: 08/09/06 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is great for a frist one I wright fanfic but I don't think it's that good to put in.

Author's Response: Don't say that! I'm sure it's great. Plus, you can always do a little editing. It's not my first fan fiction ever, just my first on these boards. But all the same, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/09/06 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

ooooh, he should have made a move! it was good that ron did. i loved the part about the flowers. i thought this was beautiful. ~hpfreak101

Author's Response:

Author's Response: Yeah, well, I wanted to stay as close to canon as possible, and personally I believe that Harry's going to stick to his pig-headed stance on protecting Ginny, so they won't get back together till the war's over (if they do, in fact, survive). But I don't think it's the end of their feelings for each other. And yes, it's great that Ron finally "got a clue." Thanks so much for the great review!

Reviewer: amy14
Date: 08/09/06 0:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Its a beautiful story. Especially the part of the sunset, its so romantic.

Author's Response: Yeah, well, I'm a very sappy romantic, so what can I say? So very glad you liked it, though. Thanks for the glorious review! p.s.--Don't you just love the word glorious? I heard it on the radio, and I was like, "I'd forgotten such a word even existed!" So I've been using it all the time since. ;) Right, well, thanks again for your review.

Reviewer: abbycadabra
Date: 08/08/06 23:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great picture. Touching, even. A very sweet moment. One thing, though (not that it's even big, it doesn't really distract), Ginny's eyes are brown, not blue.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: abbycadabra
Date: 08/08/06 23:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great picture. Touching, even. A very sweet moment. One thing, though (not that it's even big, it doesn't really distract), Ginny's eyes are brown, not blue.

Author's Response: Gosh darn it! I wasn't sure what color Ginny's eyes were, and I was GOING to go with brown, but then I thought that maybe her eyes were blue, like her brother's, so.... Please forgive me! :( Ah, well. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: muggleclaw
Date: 08/08/06 22:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a lovely story. I agree with the other reviewers--I liked how you didn't use any dialogue, and I also loved the line about the glasses. :)

Author's Response: Oh, gracias. I'm glad you liked it. I was so hoping people would like it when I submitted it. It was the first ff I've ever submitted here, and I checked to see if it had been validated three times or so a day for a WEEK. Then I couldn't be on the computer for a few days, and I got on, saw that it had been validated and had reviews as well, I pratically screamed! Anywho, glad you liked it. :) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: tiekosgirl
Date: 08/08/06 21:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

THAT IS SO SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! **tears falling**

Author's Response: Sorry! I mean, thanks! I mean...I dunno. I hope you liked it, and thought it was sad in a GOOD way. I suppose it is sad, in a romantic-sort of way. I never really thought of it like that, but hey, you're right. But it was only the second part that was sad. The first part was happy. Maybe I should have switched them around, ended on a happy note...ah, well. What's done is done. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: ronnyc718
Date: 08/08/06 20:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Beautiful. I love that you do this without dialogue.

One of my favorite lines is where Harry thinks about the "meager protection his glasses offered him." Awesome.

And the title is, of course, appropriate, and I love it.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! And as for the title--you wouldn't believe how long it took me to come up with something that simple! The Ron/Hermione story's main element was a rose, and the Harry/Ginny story had fire, so I wanted somehow to incorporate that. And I realized they were both red, and if stories were colors mine would be scarlet, and I wanted to hint at that too....I guess I ended up pretty happy with what I got, though. Thanks for the review!

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