Reviews For Security
Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/21/08 21:11
Chapter: Security

aawww!!! that was sweet!!! sad that her parents died but still sweet!!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 10/14/07 13:10
Chapter: Security

This was beautiful. Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/20/07 1:25
Chapter: Security

it's great, but sad. lily's parents always die and james is the one to comfort her. it's not a bad thing though! your story is awesome!

Reviewer: hedwigandme
Date: 11/26/06 18:37
Chapter: Security

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE write more it's great

Reviewer: flash62294
Date: 11/15/06 17:13
Chapter: Security


Author's Response: -Hands you a tissue-

Reviewer: mavry
Date: 10/08/06 23:32
Chapter: Security

awww adorable!!! great writing too, not cheesy but still cute!

Reviewer: inthewrongera
Date: 09/23/06 0:09
Chapter: Security

this is so cute! i really liked it

Reviewer: Mind_Over_Matter
Date: 09/22/06 9:09
Chapter: Security

Wow - this is really beautiful. While on the one hand, it is really intense, on the other it handles everything very softly, without pressing or forcing emotion... it all just flows naturally. Really, well done.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Sekhmet
Date: 09/17/06 6:35
Chapter: Security

Ohhh, if that doesn't make you want to melt, then I don't know what would?! What a sweet story, sad at the same time because of her parents death, but still very sweet. I love this story and the way that James longs for Lily, but not in a grossly sexual way. I really liked this story.

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 08/29/06 4:11
Chapter: Security

OMG I absolutley LOVED this story -if you can plz msg if you add too it

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't plan on adding to it, but if I do, I will make sure to message you.

Reviewer: Autumn Love
Date: 08/12/06 21:12
Chapter: Security

AWWWW. They are soooo cute. Is there more? any more? I WANT MORE!

Reviewer: LilyJamesPotter
Date: 08/12/06 4:48
Chapter: Security

15 th Review from me!!!

Lovely Songfic!!!!!!!
thanks for thanking me. but thank your for choosing me.

please come with many more fics like this.

Author's Response: Thanks for the help!

Reviewer: blackpaw93
Date: 08/11/06 7:13
Chapter: Security

Totally skillful Bree. keep it up!

Author's Response: Oh yeah, fully.

Reviewer: jaxs
Date: 08/10/06 6:08
Chapter: Security

love the story

Author's Response: That's what I want to hear!

Reviewer: hannah mickie
Date: 08/09/06 21:28
Chapter: Security sweet! I liked that SHE asked HIM out this time.

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it added a twist - I like twists :)

Reviewer: siriusly_ginny
Date: 08/09/06 20:25
Chapter: Security

oooooooooohhhhhhhh I absolutely LOOOOOOVVVVEEEEDDDD it!!great job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 08/09/06 16:33
Chapter: Security

AWW! why can't there be more chapters???

Author's Response: I laughed when I read this - it means alot that you want more!

Reviewer: A House Elf
Date: 08/09/06 15:29
Chapter: Security

Sorry, but I think the timing's off. Lily's first romantic day with James shouldn't be the day her parent's die! She would be too deep in grief to have enough time to think of James. It's just not too respectful to the dead.

Author's Response: Ok, that's your oppinion and a good point. I will definately have to work on these kind of things in future fanfics - once again constructive critisism.

Reviewer: Stag_Flower
Date: 08/09/06 14:57
Chapter: Security

A little soon and weird time to ask.

Reviewer: Autumn Love
Date: 08/09/06 13:07
Chapter: Security

Aww. How cute...they are so adorable!!! Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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