aawww!!! that was sweet!!! sad that her parents died but still sweet!!
it's great, but sad. lily's parents always die and james is the one to comfort her. it's not a bad thing though! your story is awesome!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE write more it's great
I CRIED FOREVER THATS SO SAD!
Author's Response: -Hands you a tissue-
awww adorable!!! great writing too, not cheesy but still cute!
Wow - this is really beautiful. While on the one hand, it is really intense, on the other it handles everything very softly, without pressing or forcing emotion... it all just flows naturally. Really, well done.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Ohhh, if that doesn't make you want to melt, then I don't know what would?! What a sweet story, sad at the same time because of her parents death, but still very sweet. I love this story and the way that James longs for Lily, but not in a grossly sexual way. I really liked this story.
OMG I absolutley LOVED this story -if you can plz msg if you add too it
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't plan on adding to it, but if I do, I will make sure to message you.
AWWWW. They are soooo cute. Is there more? any more? I WANT MORE!
15 th Review from me!!!
Lovely Songfic!!!!!!!
thanks for thanking me. but thank your for choosing me.
please come with many more fics like this.
Author's Response: Thanks for the help!
Totally skillful Bree. keep it up!
Author's Response: Oh yeah, fully.
love the story
Author's Response: That's what I want to hear!
Awww...so sweet! I liked that SHE asked HIM out this time.
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it added a twist - I like twists :)
oooooooooohhhhhhhh I absolutely LOOOOOOVVVVEEEEDDDD it!!great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
AWW! why can't there be more chapters???
Author's Response: I laughed when I read this - it means alot that you want more!
Sorry, but I think the timing's off. Lily's first romantic day with James shouldn't be the day her parent's die! She would be too deep in grief to have enough time to think of James. It's just not too respectful to the dead.
Author's Response: Ok, that's your oppinion and a good point. I will definately have to work on these kind of things in future fanfics - once again constructive critisism.
Aww. How cute...they are so adorable!!! Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you!