Ok, last review I tried to define awswom, but i said awsome instead... ahhhh!! i'm just confusing myself!!! awsome... awswom..........
I mean awsome... awswom... it's a new word.... Awsome: (n)... word meaning same thing as awsome... invented by... Me!! hahaha, oh well.... awsome story... A-W-S-O-M-E!!
Wow. Hee hee, I like how you can actually carry a rhythm... often people just make it up and it sounds horrible... but this-- this was perfection. Truly Dr Seuss AA material. Awswom.
I loved it! I hope Luna is in upcomung chapters.
THat is soo funny.....My favorite part so far would have to be the ass thing with hermione and the boys...that is soo funny
Very funny! It's kool how it rhymes and is a story at the same time! :) Rating=10! Update ASAP!
I dare say it's rather good, I would clap if I could. But you wouldn't hear it. And so I fear it. For clapping, if I say, may be a good way to spend a whole day. But, if I wish to rhyme like such, I'd better not clap too much. It hurts my hands to the very bone, I wish you'd just leave me alone. Toodles! Oh, and I do like the emphasis on Hermy's rear. *gasp* I didn't rhyme! EEK!!!
A good story, this is It'll change the fiction biz I think it is really good, now I must go eat some food (Yes.. I know I can't rhyme)
LoL! That was so awsome! Favorites!!
That was awesome!!!
That was great!!! keep writing
Definitely funny! I hope you continue. Good work, LOL!
lol! Very funny! I never read a poetry fanfic before. Very unique. Update asap!
That was very funny!!!
I'm a sucker for light verse. It is fast becoming a lost art. It was creative, humorous, and it scanned. Very nice job.
Oooh thats just class!! Really well done, hehehehe!! Gots me laughing out loud!! hehehehe!!
you must write more you silly fool or I will throw you in a pool (sorry, i had too)