I wish you haven't told us outright that the POV is flexible. It's a wonderful technique, and aside from cleverness on the side of the author, it also shows the bond our Ron and Hermione has.
"For years I've watched you, not knowing how I felt..." How true.Your poem reads like a song, even a dance, like all poems should. Your stanza's last lines have these punctuation-like definition in them. Like periods, commas, and exclamation points, they declare, add and subtly cry... in jubilee.
A very nice piece you have here. I'd like to memorize it, like a well-composed love song. The words you used were simplistic; there are no devices at all. But then Ron and Hermione's love is simple, though it took some time to bloom, and it's as deep and devoted as any that bloomed in two people's hearts.~Joanna
Very, romantic. Good job, it's hard to write a poem that can be from more than one persons POV. Keep writing!
Awh, this is so sweet! :) I love how it fits both Ron and Hermione's PoV! Especially the part that says, "Your unique hair" :P It never really struck me that they both *do* have unique hair!
The last line is so sweet, too, and gives it such a wonderful ending!
Oh....I loved it!!!!!! So cute.......
ahhh sigh touching love how you made frm either of there points of view xoxoxoxo
I love it!
Heh. I wrote a Ron/Hermione poem a lot like this, but I've never seen this before.
ohhhhhhhhhh so sweet! really really good i love it :)
good job xox
Great job! short but sweet! :)
i dont know if you have read the 7th book yet but ron and hermione get merried when they grow up now i have to go and watch cori in the house have a good live.good bye.
Wow. That was really good. I love it.
Beautifully written, it sounds professional but original. I could use this to get a date :)
A deeply downtrodden person sits at her desk surrounded by crumpled parchment. Deeply disturbed at the happenings of the last few days and anxiously awaiting the reply that must come. She worries about the great horned owl she has just sent will it return with aid? Or will it be shot down on sight.
If the message is coming through please help me
The Mentor was sitting at his/her desk, it had been a long day. The Fan fic writers had always had horrible grammar and there run on sentences would drive her batty. As she bent low to add another parchment to the to many corrections pile, which happened to sitat the bottom of her/his garbage can. She heard a flutter of wings as a great horned owl swooped down into her/his office. She unraveled the letter quickly and hopefully, casting her eyes at the first three words she new it was going to be a long day. She sat down at her desk and began to read.
I need your help on this most mentally fixating problem
I do not know how to contact any one from here
she/he read on
For the past 3 days I have been diligently working on a fic, My first fic ever. I have attempted about 5 hundred times to submit this fic when I realized it was my formatting at approximately 4 am I finally got it across but this morning it has disappeared from my archive.
I don't know how to get a hold of anyone in here and decided this was my best course of action. Please help me, It really is driving me quite and irreversibly crazy at the moment and I cannot rest until I have overcome this problem.
If you understand my predicament I would love your aid
anxiously awaiting your reply
The most frustrated Lobena
So sweet! I love it! Write more poems about them, pease!
Author's Response: Sure thing! ^.^
Now that's a love story (or poem...)
Author's Response: It sure is..... =^_^=
LOVE IT! :)