Reviews For Death Veil
Reviewer: Katie616
Date: 05/07/08 20:02
Chapter: Death Veil

*sob*

I have a brother exactly like Will. . . I can't possibly imagine what it would be like for him to do something like that. . . *curls up and cries*

I. . . I'm afraid I really can't say anything else about this story. . . I guess it just hits too close to home. . . that's what makes it so good. I love this story. . . and yet I don't. . .

Thank you for yet another wonderful reading experience. *cries*
~Katie

Author's Response: Oh, Katie! I'm sorry! I'm glad you like it yet you don't :)

Reviewer: james_fanatic
Date: 05/29/07 6:37
Chapter: Death Veil

Wow, Sunray. This was a really sad and beautiful fic. I really love it.

Thank you for writing about this. It touched my heart.

*hugs*

~Jamie~

Author's Response: Ee!! Thanks Jamie!! *hugs*

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 03/04/07 0:00
Chapter: Death Veil

I haven't reviewed this yet?...Ok, I though that I had...This story was sweet and sad. 10/10!~H_o_I_

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 02/04/07 9:16
Chapter: Death Veil

Wow. That was wonderful - great word choice, too. Jade's reactions were perfect - her shaking her head, mainly. Don't now why that seems so perfect. It made her obstinate and more like the six-year-old she felt like once more.

I like how you ended this, too. Very well done. It sort of pounded the meaning home, you know.

~Tyger, tyger, burning bright - Euphrates

Author's Response: *grins* I'm glad you like it. I don't know what's so good about shaking her head either, but it seems to fit...Thanks for the review :) ~Sunray

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 01/24/07 14:51
Chapter: Death Veil

How sad!! Good original characters!!

Author's Response: :D I'm glad you liked it *passes tissue* thanks for the review!

Reviewer: merav potter
Date: 09/04/06 14:29
Chapter: Death Veil

wher did you get the idea??????????
it's great, even though I don't see a connection to HP except the Death Veil in the Death Room...


Author's Response: The fic was written for the Harry Hospital Wing Project, which was all about the Department of Mysteries. You know the song at the bottom's origins.....right? anyway, thanks for the review, Merav.

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 08/01/06 6:12
Chapter: Death Veil

First off, I must congratulate you on finding time to write this fic! I sadly didn’t, and I've seen you in the SCU, you're quite active! Second, it's a GREAT plotline. I actually felt really sad - I barely know my own brother, but just this fic made me realise how sad i would feel if anything like this were to happen. Also, I loved the little poem/song at the bottom - Is it your own? It sums up the entire fic very well, and gives it meaning. I also thought that switching points of view was handled well, like the entire first chunk of the story was a flashback. Good Job!

One small nit-pick before I go, -"We are her to solve the mystery of the world for future generations. ” A tiny typo, it should read “We are here”. Apart from that, a fantastic fic, and good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, the song was originally written in another language, but I translated and changed it. It has a tune, which really gives the song more fullness, but I can't exactly put notes on here, can I? Thank you so much for the review!

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