Reviews For Thrice Defied
Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 11/10/07 14:08
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

nathaniel: 1. has a horrible name, and 2. is two years younger then her!!! I mean, how desperate is she?!!!!

great job with this chapter! i haven't read this story in forever so i ad a lot of catching up to do today, but it's a really good story! update soon!

Author's Response: she's not desperate...does she sound like it though? but i'm sure you're just prejudiced because you want her to come to her senses and realise "hey potter isn't as bad as i thought-why don't we get married and have a kid called harry????" but unfortunately they're in for quite a ride those two.... and about the name nathaniel-is it that horrible? i mean nat i don't like but nathaniel's a tiny bit better and also i have to say i wanted a name that reminded me of zacharias-you know the hufflepuff ron hates? because if you remember hermione thinks about using him to get back at ron for going out with lavender...the situation is veeery similar isn't it? thanks for the great review-i will update soon, though i'm not sure i like the way i've written next chapter...:)

Reviewer: duskshadow
Date: 11/06/07 8:12
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

interesting stuff, a little bit stilted in some scenes but a great concept & i really like the way you've broght in Regulus. One suggestions would be to try and read the dialoge aloud as you go - it'll make it easier to write & give it a bit more fluency, making it more believeble.

Author's Response: hey duskshadow, thanks for the review...so could you explain the way the scenes are stilted exactly?like tell me an example of where the dialogue wasn't as good?maybe send an email or add another review?just so i can make sure i get what you're saying...thanks anyway and i'm glad you like regulus!

Reviewer: Honorary_Marauderess
Date: 11/05/07 16:34
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

in this chapter she's bellatrix black but in the one before she was bellatrix lestrange.. im confused

Author's Response: omg!!!!!! oooooooooooops! d'you realise not even the mods noticed that?thank you so much for pointing it out!!!! :D she's bella black not lestrange although she is still rodolphus's girlfriend(apparentlky)!!!! again thank you so much for pointing that out i'm going to edit chapter 8 right now and all confusion will subside! again i'm going to thank you and i'm really sorry you got confused-did you like it though????

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 11/05/07 15:21
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

yay, great story, update soon!!!!!


Author's Response: thanks for the review Luna_Lovegood11 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:))))

Reviewer: sorial
Date: 11/05/07 9:01
Chapter: Chapter 1-Aboard the Hogwarts Express

firewhiskey......sounds fun!
great first chapter :) and now to read on!

Author's Response: thank you so much...tell me what you think of the other chapters too!!!!!

Reviewer: ThisMustBeLove
Date: 11/05/07 3:22
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

good!

Author's Response: It's ThisMustBeLove! See? I told you the update was on the way!Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: thismafer
Date: 11/04/07 21:41
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

i like it but.....when is lily going to fall for james??although i noticed that lily has started to care more about james great story

Author's Response: But?But? I don't like buts...ohhh now you've got me thinking you don't like it at all...but (see?i use it too!) really I can't have Lily falling head over heels over head again for James so early in the story...but (i used it again...) i promise she's begining to realise that this marauder maybe isn't just a marauder to her now...and of course...well you'll just have to wait and see in the next chapter!!!Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 11/04/07 21:13
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

good chapter! i like how you show lilys begining to become mor concerned for james dont make her fall for nat tho! i mean hes cool and evrything...but hes not James!!!!! update!

Author's Response: Of course he's not James. No one is James. No one could ever be James...especially for Lily. But she will begin to have feelings for both of them and she'll be terribly confused and...wait...why am I telling you all this? You'll have to wait for my next chapter!!!Thanks for the review!!! :)

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 11/04/07 17:53
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

Great chapter!
Which sister was that, Bellatrix or Andromeda? I'm guessing Andromeda, since Bellatrix probably would have been all for joining the death eaters right away.
Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Well, as i've made it as though Andromeda has already left school it couldn't have been her...but i like how you're really getting into the story...exploring all the possibilities...!!! Also I've tried to show Bellatrix in a slightly different light-as though when she was younger she wasn't as evil (or as mad) but you'll see later on that the two sisters sort of exchange positions as death eaters especially when Bellatrix meets her Master... Thanks for the great review!!!

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 11/04/07 16:36
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

I realy liked this!! Nat's so cute! But James is cuter. I like how u have Bella apprehensive to join at first, I think that's great! Update soon!

Author's Response: of course james is cuter!!!! i agree though nat's a really good character that i reaaly love...and of course he's got a lot more to do throughout this fanfic... about bella...well...she is nasty but she must have some kind of conscience somewhere deep down...but of course that disappears soon enough....thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Passion For Prongs
Date: 11/04/07 16:30
Chapter: Chapter 9-Christmas Without Prongs

Egad! Hurry up and post or I'll have to...well, I don't know! Just hurry!!!!

~Passion Fir Prongs

Author's Response: *smiles*what will you do if i don't update? i'm curious...maybe i'll just not update to see what will happen, eh??? no, i'm kidding, glad you liked it!!!

Reviewer: ThisMustBeLove
Date: 10/26/07 6:53
Chapter: Chapter 8-Under The Mistletoe

update quickly!

Reviewer: ThisMustBeLove
Date: 10/26/07 6:53
Chapter: Chapter 8-Under The Mistletoe

update quickly!

Author's Response: hello there, ThisMustBeLove ! I've finished the chapter(it's called Christmas without Prongs!!!!) and I am about to post it as we speak! hope you like it!

Reviewer: black sabathings
Date: 10/10/07 5:26
Chapter: Chapter 1-Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Nice

Author's Response: simple yet effective...!thnx!

Reviewer: lilyevans489
Date: 10/10/07 5:04
Chapter: Chapter 1-Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Just a quick review to tell you that i love your story, and to KEEP UPDATING!

Author's Response: i am so totally not supposed to be checking for reviews or otherwise surfing the net but i couldn't resist...who cares about latin homework i should be doing? well, i suppose i do but what the hell i need a break to answer these great reviews eh? i'm sure i'll be forgiven! thank you lilyevans489!

Author's Response: i am so totally not supposed to be checking for reviews or otherwise surfing the net but i couldn't resist...who cares about latin homework i should be doing? well, i suppose i do but what the hell i need a break to answer these great reviews eh? i'm sure i'll be forgiven! thank you lilyevans489!

Author's Response: oops over-enthusiasm just there! :)

Reviewer: hermybabay82
Date: 10/10/07 0:03
Chapter: Chapter 8-Under The Mistletoe

I absolutely love the way you write! I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: thank you hermybabay82! next chapter will be posted as soon as i have fixed it up just a tad...keep checking for an update!

Reviewer: ThisMustBeLove
Date: 10/06/07 3:23
Chapter: Chapter 8-Under The Mistletoe

omg i loved this entry so cool! i like how u did the whole lily not returning the feelings thingy and about snape being jealous
classic!
keep writing when will the nxt one be posted??


Author's Response: this was a really great review-thanx! snape jealous...well all i can say is that he'll be jealous a lot more soon...in all sorts of different situations! next post *squints eyes thinking* i'm sorry i really don't know...weekends are really the only time i have to write the next chapter so i've done quite a bit of it now...as for when you'll get to read it...i promise to post as soon as it's done! don't give up if it takes a while but i guarantee you'll love it!

Reviewer: lost willow
Date: 10/01/07 10:16
Chapter: Chapter 8-Under The Mistletoe

i loved your story . i love james and lily .


love lost willow

Author's Response: hey lost willow! finally you managed a review, i was starting to wonder-just kidding! i'll answer your email when i have time (schollwork-as you know) thank you...

Reviewer: lulovesrupe
Date: 09/30/07 2:02
Chapter: Chapter 8-Under The Mistletoe

heyy i just started reading today and i absolutly love it!! its already in my favoritess! so anyway, please update soon :)

Author's Response: thank you so so much! nexr chapter has more action than last and also....an almost-kiss! but i won't give anymore up as i haven't got a clue when i'll update but i will update!!! thanx again!

Reviewer: lulovesrupe
Date: 09/29/07 14:41
Chapter: Chapter 8-Under The Mistletoe

please please please update!!!
im dying to find out whats goingoo to happen!!!
amaizing storyy!

Author's Response: As I said i have absolutely no idea when i'll be able to update-might be tomorrow might be -well- later...!*winks nastily)* but i have the chapter almost ready, so don't give up on me!!!!!! Thanks a lot lot lot lot lot....!!!!!!!!

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