Reviews For Thrice Defied
Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/26/07 12:21
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch

Yes! Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Yes! Another excellent review! I will update soon, I promise!

Reviewer: TherealLuna
Date: 08/26/07 2:34
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch

Good story. Why was Lily all friendly to James all of a sudden, can you explain that please? Keep writing! :o)

Author's Response: Hmm, Ok, Chapter 7, got it! Sorry, wasn't sure which chapter you'd reviewed! Ok, well, James has just saved her from Voldy and also helped her with the Horcrux translation thingy, so Lily's not going to be as bad as she was before, is she? She's a sweatheart (like her son) and cares for others even if one of those others means James Potter! So, answered your question? If not, ask again! Keep reading!

Reviewer: Lily_Friend
Date: 08/23/07 18:17
Chapter: Chapter 1-Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Nice, I like how you did Sirius and Remus;
Just like I imagine.

Author's Response: Of course-Sirius utterly hilarious and Remus just a little serious (!)! thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Hogwarts Mysteries
Date: 08/23/07 4:49
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch

mooreeee please
so addicting :)

Author's Response: addicting-yay. i've never been more happy to hear that word-thank you hogwarts mysteries :)

Reviewer: autumn_witch
Date: 08/22/07 14:16
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch

You're story is amazing!! I really thought it was funny when: "Lily checked her watch. It was half past eleven, nearly midnight. The matron would be asleep, so no one would see her. She threw the covers of her and sat on Potter’s bed. He looked as though Christmas had come early.

“Don’t get any ideas, Potter. I just need your help.”' You're story has been great so far! Can't wait for it to continue and james and lily to hook up!!! :)

Author's Response: *another blush creeping up* ah, don't, it's not THAT amazing! No, I'm kidding it's the best story ever and I am ever so proud of it! thank you for the excellent review-this kinda stuff makes me wnna post every other day!!!

Reviewer: ariana_dumbleodore
Date: 08/22/07 13:23
Chapter: Chapter 2-One in a Million

I thought Alice IS English, so she naturally has English accent...

Author's Response: cool name ariana! alice IS english-of course she is but when she gets overexcited about quidditch or starts yelling at padfoot and prongs her accent becomes very cockney-all inappropriate swear words included!

Reviewer: Coff
Date: 08/21/07 2:07
Chapter: Chapter 2-One in a Million

Hey, I love the story, but I just wanted to let you know that you actually spell it with one 'o' - Wollongong =]

I know it's spelt wrong in the book too, so I just thought I'd let you know.

But great story! And I love how you put the part where they're trying to say it in, because I love it when people try to say aboriginal words xD

Author's Response: it's aboriginal eh?didn't know that-thanx for the info! and if it's spelt wrong in the book you can't blame me-anyway thanks ever so much and keep on reading!!!

Reviewer: Evans613
Date: 08/20/07 23:34
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch


Author's Response: wonderful review!

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 08/19/07 15:15
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch

Great chapter!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Cont soon!!

Author's Response: Great chapter? Ah, I'm blushing! Cont soon definitely!

Reviewer: Shadow Sirius
Date: 08/19/07 14:26
Chapter: Chapter 1-Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Haha, that is genious, keep it up, i know i am reading like 7 chapters at once but hey, its so funny... "What the keck a movie is?"

Author's Response: Genius?Moi? Keep on reading as long as you make sure you tell me you enjoy it!THANX!

Reviewer: Hogwarts Mysteries
Date: 08/19/07 5:25
Chapter: Chapter 2-One in a Million

haha Woollongong Shimmy
woollongong is a place in australia :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I know-not that I've been there but like I said in "Quidditch through ages" JKR mentions it!You found it funny though?So it's only Lily that has trouble with it! Thank you for the funny review!!!!

Reviewer: 001anonymous
Date: 08/18/07 23:35
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch

Sorry if I havent reviewed to every single chapter. My bloody internet's so slow to open a page today. But anyways, I really like the way you write your story! Good flaw and characterizations! Im all excited to hear the next! So update soon! lol

Author's Response: i love reviews!!!! thanks again and let's hope pages open faster for you from now on!!!!Update I will as soon as i can!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: 001anonymous
Date: 08/18/07 21:50
Chapter: Chapter 1-Aboard the Hogwarts Express

The four Marauders walked down the crowded corridor, occasionally hexing a Slytherin (James), chatting up a girl (Sirius), reciting incantations (Remus) or giggling uncontrollably for no obvious reason (guess!). A few doors from the empty compartment they’d unofficially declared their own, James stopped abruptly in front of an extremely pretty (and extremely annoyed) red-haired girl.
Haha! I loved this part! It was so funny! I really had a mental image about this! lol

Author's Response: wow-i love new reviewers! i think that's my fav part of chapter one too!keep on reading and you'll find veen more funny stuff!!!!!!!

Reviewer: aussigirl
Date: 08/18/07 17:03
Chapter: Chapter 1-Aboard the Hogwarts Express

This is the first James/Lily fan fic where she acctually curses him! You just made my day!

Author's Response: hey-new reviewer!thnx and i really hope you enjoy the story from now on! i promise more curses between the two will come and hopefully make your day again and again!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 08/18/07 16:03
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch

I like how you are working the Horocruxes into the storyline. Nice interaction with James and Lily.
Glad you're back, and update soon!

Author's Response: thank you and i'm glad to be back! horcruxes are important in the story but only when they meet again with voldy...don't worry i've written the next chapter and i'll update as soon as i can!

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 08/18/07 16:00
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch

Loved the lil wink at the end from Lily there, just dyeing for them to get together!!!!! Love your story, keep it up!

Author's Response: well obviously they will end up together in the end but we've got a long way to go-but next chapter will make everyone less impatient-you'll see!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lily meet ginny
Date: 08/18/07 15:22
Chapter: Chapter 7-A Horcrux and A Snitch

i like the plot line so far... keep writing

Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you!!!

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 08/13/07 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 1-Aboard the Hogwarts Express

Narcissa is older then Sirius she is born 1955 and she woudn't be on Hogwarts when they are in the seventh year

Author's Response: Trust me, I've read harry potter enough times and I've done enough research to know when everyone's born! but cissy fit nicely in my story so i thought i'd make it look as though she's younger. don't worry though, i haven't altered jkr's plot so much-narcissa is one of the very few alterations i made for Thrice Defied. But i appreciate the correction-it's good to know someone's taken the time to check up on my plot and i appreciate any corrections made!!!thanx!!!

Author's Response: P.S. I hoped you enjoyed it nonetheless!!!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 06/06/07 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 6-A Visit From A Friend

Thanks for responding to my review. After I had sent it in yesterday, I started thinking about the Fifth Chapter. Why would Dumbledore send to students to Hogsmead if he suspected Voldemort was coming? Then again, knowing Dumbledore, he always has a reason. Other than that, I can't wait for more. Once dified, twice to go!

Author's Response: well there's no real reason for Dumbledore's decision although from what we've seen in the books he prefers keeping everything pretty normal at Hogwarts-and also in the Wizarding world no one's realy realised what Voldemort's capable of so it's was a kind of warning... Anyway thnx for your reviews-and i love answering questions about my fic so keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 06/05/07 15:56
Chapter: Chapter 6-A Visit From A Friend

This is such a good story! I like How Lily is begining to warm up to James, even if she won't admit it. The rune book, does it have anything to do with horocruxes? Lily wrote some of it down, so she might figure it out, right? Keep writing and update soon!

Author's Response: Hmmmm, hermione clone eh? original... thnx for review-yeah, safe to say there is a connection with horcruxes... you;ll just have to wait and see....!

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