Krrruuummmm! That was the last person that I expected to be in that house at Christmas. What a twist. Awesome.
How is it that Harry didn't recognize Hermione? You describe Harry with brown hair instead of black and contacts to change his eyes, but what of Mione? I don't remember?
Definately differant, posing as muggles, trying to forget their past. A winner so far.
Short but to the point.
Nice story. It's digs right deep into your soul.
This the first chapter story I have read with Harry and Hermonie, and I loved it! Please continue your writing. You are talented.
Definitely enjoyed your story!! The quotes at the beginning of each chapter were a nice touch--haven't seen that in any of the other stories I've read here. Keep up the great work!!
I've really enjoyed this fic. Despite guessing that James was Harry when he first appeared, it was still fun watching them discover one another again. At first6 i thought Gee might be Ginny, but then realised when Hermione knew who she really was that Gee was a new friend. Hope they stay friends though, it'd be a shame if they didn't. The switching between times was a little confusing, but once you reach the last chapter all the flashbacks fall into place. I still don't like Voktor Krum, and why was he at the Christmas party at all? How come Ron agreed? I wouldn't mind reading a sequel to this, if you've written one, even if it's only a one shot to see how everyone reacts to their return to the wizarding world. Anyway, brilliant fic.
very good writing. nice plot. but I found the overtone extremely sad. I cried for almost all the time it took me to read it. Good, moving fic though. Maybe I am just too emotional........ Good job!
hey...nice story...very emotional....i luvd it
Great story! I can't wait to read more of your work!!!
Awww! OMG. That was soooo cute! =D Loved it. xxx
ya surely tat was a really good story.i enjoyed readin it very much :-)....i wanna read more of ur stories bout h/hr..........so when r u doing tat??
Cool story!! I really enjoyed it.
That's sad, but it was a great story!
I think you should write an epilogue of how it goes in the wizarding world.
this is a really sweet chp but i wanted it to be longer and i am waitin for ur next chp very very very eagerly pls update it soon.....
OMG! This is great! i canot wait for the next chapter!!
lovely! I'm not a h/hr supporter but- when it's written well, it's a great thing to read sneakily! :] keep it up!
Pleaz in need the next chappy! by the way this one was way awesome! short but sweet! Pleaz update soon, love your stories!