Ah. That sounds just like Hermione. Always needing the upper hand. You have done a great job of 'placing yourself' in her shoes.

yikes!!!! o my god!!!!!! she saus yes right!?!!?!!! right1!!!

Ahh this is so amazing! I love this story so much, you're a wonder writer. I can't wait for the last chapter! Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll check out my other story as well!

Wow....that's all I can say. Such detail, I love it. It's one of the best fan fics I've ever read. Outstanding Job! :)

awww.
i think i'm inlove with your story (:
hihi ;3

telmasif

Author's Response: Aww, thanks!! :)

Wow great chapter!
So many emotions!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Cont soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have it out soon.

YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! YES!

YYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!

Finally!!!

I absolutely loved it (you could probably tell) 

Again, you amaze me with your talent with words. You are one of the few authors that do. You put in such emotion into your fics and it’s just so great.

Truly, whenever I see that you’ve updated this story, I always jump in my seat, excited. I love reading this story and I’m disappointed that it’s coming to an end. Are you going to make a sequel showing Entropy again – coming after them – or are you going to end the Entropy thing in the last chapter… which is the next one! I’m going to cry!!!

“Lightening lit up the dark environment and a rumble of thunder interrupted Hermione’s narrative. The sky started to open and heavy drops of water fell from it, slowly at first. Soon, the rain came down in sheets. Every so often, a bolt of lightening would illuminate the scene: two figures against a silver screen of water, dripping with sweat, water, blood, and tears.”

Absolutely beautiful. It’s gorgeously written and I felt like it was so perfect for their actions. Draco and Hermione kissing… in this sort of setting… it rarely gets put together in fan fictions. And I’m delighted that this worked out so perfectly in yours. The contrast is great. Such beautiful actions in such a dark setting. LOVED it!

Hermione better say yes to Draco. If she doesn’t then I better see a sequel were she does! Or you’ll never hear the last of me.

-Priti
PS. Don’t mind the threat. I sometimes get carried away. Lol.


Author's Response: Ah, I absolutely adore your reviews! I'll ignore the threat, but I feel there's another one coming: there will be no sequel to this story. You'll see by the epilogue that there won't be a need for one. Although I'm flattered that you think it's good enough for one! Thanks as always for reading and leaving such wonderful reviews. :D

wa!!..this one is soooooo great!!!!..i luvvvvv this chap!..will you send me an email when you are going to post you're next update?..tnx! please update soon!,..

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awwww I love this story! Thanks for making my day by updating!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for reading!!