Reviewer: DreamingOfRon
Date: 09/09/06 18:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

harry has a bit of a potty mouth doesn't he?

Author's Response: In the books, there are several points where it says "Harry swore." He kicked the door of the Room of Requirement when he couldnt' get it open, and he had on his cloak at the time and a bunch of first years thought he was a "foul mouthed poltergeist." So yeah, I think he drops a few 4-letter words when the time is right...

Reviewer: 4evayours
Date: 09/09/06 7:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

:D i was reading this story and my mum came in the room!!! ah, it was so funny. i lov this chapter!! i was lmao at every line!!!

Author's Response: *hairy eyeball* You're lucky I'm not your mother, because I'd have confiscated your machine! Even if you're 30 years old! Nobody ought to read this sinful trash, it'll make hair grow on your palms. *wink*

Reviewer: Zacko Borni
Date: 09/07/06 18:36
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

Wow. Wierd story. I really didn't want to read it, but right from the summery, it was so sick I couldn't look away. Anyway, it was entertaining to say the leat, definatly not something I would normally read, but I guess it's pretty good... if your into that kind of stuff.

Author's Response: Eh, it's all in fun. I mean, taboos aside, it's very Snapelike, don't you think?

Reviewer: Ellie Martin
Date: 09/07/06 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

okay, its a great story, but i gotta say its pretty sick lol

Author's Response: Exactly as advertised, huh? Do I lie?? *sporfle*

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 09/07/06 7:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

Hysterical! Sick, but hysterical! Snape is so evil. Seriously, loved it. Please write more!

Author's Response: Chapter 2 should be up...unless the computer gremlins devoured it.

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 09/06/06 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 2: Going for the Gold

Yea! It got validated! I didn't have to run for cover this time (just a few pillow over the eyes moments) I'm glad you brought this story to MFF! I love Snape! He would do something like that. I wonder if they ever told Hermione about it and what she had to say. Loved it!

Author's Response: Something tells me that none of them would ever tell anyone else about this. Snerkle. Esp. if I could have submitted the original version of this chapter. >:P

Reviewer: loringalta
Date: 09/06/06 18:27
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

love it

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: loringalta
Date: 09/06/06 18:24
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

love it

Reviewer: Raynetillsunrise21
Date: 08/30/06 16:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

HILARIOUS!! Please write more!!

Author's Response: Thanks--I'm a' tryin, it was just a little too graphic for the mods the first round...

Reviewer: Raynetillsunrise21
Date: 08/30/06 16:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

HILARIOUS!! Please write more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! This is probably my goofiest story but there's a lot of snark in all my work...

Reviewer: dragon mystique
Date: 08/27/06 23:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

eek! you had said before that the rest was on your LJ..I can't find it on there. Could you e-mail it to me since it doesn't look like it'll ever get accepted? And yes..I did pick up on I think I may be just as sick as you are...**evil grin**

Author's Response: the LJ: all the R-rated stuff is Friend Locked, so if you want to read it, Friend me and I'll Friend you back (I love how that is a verb). I did get some help from a Mod re: what I had to cut back to get it accepted, I just haven't had time to do it yet...but I plan to.

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421
Date: 08/26/06 11:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

I agree, It so sick, yet I can't look away.Lol. Waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I finally got some good feedback on how to get it validated--have to tone it down a lot, sorry, but it'll still be hilarious. If the queue ever comes back up..

Reviewer: Chesca
Date: 08/25/06 20:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge


.......Snape is a sexy beast sexy beast sexy beast and he is all mine

Author's Response: sporfle...well, I'm having a bit of trouble getting it validated--too adult for the site. Hoping I can tone it down enough for the ending, it's funny.

Reviewer: horntail123
Date: 08/18/06 19:11
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

i like, i like. i'm presuming you think snape is evil? good story

Author's Response: muhuhuahahaha...just wait'll you see the ending (assuming they ever validate the durn thing...)

Reviewer: dragon mystique
Date: 08/13/06 22:55
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

ahhh! The other chapter needs to be validated! My oh my....this is funny..I want **no..scratch that** NEED to know what happens next!! My gutter brain can't take the anticipation!! **waves to mods** please hurry!

Author's Response: sigh...don't hold your breath, they didn't approve it the first time around, though I never got a letter explaining it, so I couldn't fix anything...but hopefully this round will go through.

Reviewer: Fire Of The Phoenix
Date: 08/11/06 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

Ooer! Bring on the next chapter!

Author's Response: It's all up to the mods now...though if they don't approve it, it IS over on Livejournal...

Reviewer: peacock_girl15
Date: 08/10/06 16:02
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

so i just read the resoponse to my first reveiw and you said I ain't seen nothing yet. Should I be scared? lol! I can't wait for the next chapter! I really wanna see what happens between harry and draco *smirks*!!!!

Author's Response: Be afraid. Be very afraid. I don't know if it even stands a chance at making it past the mods.

Reviewer: Igo Retla
Date: 08/09/06 19:19
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

Nice prose, good imagination and character representation--though the "sick fuck" was a little short of what I expect of Harry, too much of the author bleeding through. As far as where it's going...well, I read enough.

Author's Response: I'll refer to Pg. 458 of HP and the HBP: "Harry swore. Someone screamed. He looked around to see a gaggle of first years running back around the corner , apparently under the impression that they had just encountered a particularly foul-mouthed ghost." What I gather from that, and other canon, is: A) Harry's no choir boy; B) if he's capable of saying them, he's MOST definitely capable of thinking them; C) if there's anyone he's likely to think about in those terms, it would probably be Snape. I wouldn't say it's "bleedthrough" as presenting aspects of the character in a way that the novels, not being "rated for Professors," cannot. And may I point out that reviews are also not "rated for Professors," so if you could watch your language in the public forum, that would be appropriate.

Reviewer: snapelover17
Date: 08/07/06 23:16
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

I can't wait to read the next chapter, I couldn't stop laughing in the first. Best story I've heard all day!!

Author's Response: *sinister grin* Ch. 1 was fun to write, but Teh Funneh REALLY starts up in Ch. 2...

Reviewer: Potterlovesme
Date: 08/07/06 13:03
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Locker Room Challenge

Ohhh! Very interesting!

Author's Response: thanks!

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