Reviews For Gemini Swapped
Reviewer: laceymoibella
Date: 12/17/07 12:12
Chapter: Gemini Swapped

Your story had me smiling throughout the entire time I was reading it.

I was quite curious to find out how long the effects of their new experiment would last. As well as what Fred and George would be doing when it wore off.

I liked how you included differences between Fred and George.

Very creative fic.

~Lacey
Participant in The Order of the Ravenclaw House Elves

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed this! I'm a twin, so I know exactly what it is like being one. I just put in things similar to what makes my sister different from me! :) Cyns

Reviewer: Hokey
Date: 05/11/07 19:06
Chapter: Gemini Swapped

LOL! This was hilarious, Cyns. Sure, you're a twin, but I still can't see how you came up with this wonderful idea! =D

I think you've chosen good characteristics for Fred and George; I've never really seen the differences between them, but I'm sure there must be some, and you convinced me. It was fun to see Ginny realising their switch, and the scenes with Angelina were just plain LMAO-moments! =P

I think you've done a very good job of developing a fun and original idea. Was it for that drabble challenge? *suspects it was a liiiittle long for a drabble* =P Anyways, only piece of crit I've got is that you used 'then' when it should've been 'than' in some places, and that I'd have loved for it to be longer and even more descriptive =D Good job, hun! *huggles*

~Jen

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a great review! I have always had problems with Then and Than. I'll try to fix that. I wrote this for a Monthly One-shot challenge a while back, and I even place in it! :) THis is the only story that I have ever had place. It was a lot of fun to write, and I just emphasized the same type of differences in them as is in me and my sister. :) Cyns

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 04/30/07 15:40
Chapter: Gemini Swapped

funny!!! lol its good!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed this! I had a lot of fun writing it. I'm a twin so I get the twin connection! :) Cyns

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 08/09/06 14:54
Chapter: Gemini Swapped

Great story!! Wonder why you could imagine people figuring the switch out ;) Guess BEING a twin can have it's advantages, especially in stories like this!! Great work Sis!!

Author's Response: Thanks SIs! I knew you would like it. Being a twin was the main reason I had to enter that challenge. :) Thanks for your help with betaing! I know I really need the help.

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/09/06 11:06
Chapter: Gemini Swapped

Hi,
Nice job, I like the idea of body-switching creams (sort of like the canary creams then?). You did a good job giving the twins distinct habits to make the switch clear. I had Ginny figure out the switch too- I wonder how many others did as well? ;)
Good luck in the challenge! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I was thinking of the Canary Creams when I had them working on a disguise candy. :) I thought that Ginny would be one of the first ones to notice they weren't acting as they normally do. She seems to be the type to notice. :) I wish you luck with the challenge also! Cyns

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