Reviewer: viva_lee
Date: 05/04/07 14:52
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

That was so sweet. i dont usually like poetry, but you definetly have a gift. Keep writing!!!

Author's Response: ^_^ thanx, you just brightned up my bad day!

Reviewer: Rapid Reader
Date: 12/22/06 16:08
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

Yes, I do luv 2 review!

Reviewer: Rapid Reader
Date: 12/22/06 0:05
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

Bravo! You r the best writer I've seen here yet!


Author's Response: You really like to review, don't you? lol :P that's great. I love hearing what people think, I tells me what you both like and dislike to improve writing. yay for you!

Reviewer: phoenix_lullaby
Date: 10/13/06 16:53
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

That was sooooooooooooooo SWEET!!!!!!! I absolutely love it. And that's a very big copliment seeming as I don't like poetry! Absolutely wonderful! No words can describe how beautiful this fan fic was!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: WOW, you're nice.

Author's Response: WOW, you're nice.

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 08/10/06 13:40
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

That was a very nice poem. I especially like the last line!! Great job!!

Author's Response: Well, you're the second person to tell me their fav line...

Reviewer: A House Elf
Date: 08/09/06 13:40
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

Oooh! I beatiful retelling. You have a gift, my friend.

Author's Response: Thank you! you'r so sweet!

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 08/04/06 12:21
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

This poem is so cute! I am usually not a fan of couplet poetry, as I feel that sometimes it crowds the creative message trying to get out, but I really enjoyed reading this poem. I especially liked how you mentioned the people who were watching the kiss a lot and their reactions. My favorite line was,
"Romilda Vane thinking "Kill me now".
Overall, this is a really cute poem and I enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: That was your favorite line? Great! Personaly, It's one of my least favorite, the hardest to rhyme. It's so strange how most of my reviews say they don't like poetry, but they like this one. Writers can now thank me for getting people reading poetry. Love ya!

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 08/02/06 17:48
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

Very Cute! I hardley ever read poems and I'm so glad I happened upon this! I love the pace and rythme of it. I think for this being your first fan fic you do amazing and I look forward to anything else you may write! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank You very much! I have already written 5 other poems, 1 should be accepted any day now. If you loved the rhyme, however, I hardly ever write this way. And none of my other poems will be in this form, sorry! But, I assure you if you likes this, you'll like my other work,too! LYLAS!

Reviewer: peacock_girl15
Date: 07/31/06 20:06
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

Tha's a very well written poem! I like it. good job!

Author's Response: Thank Ya!!

Reviewer: ravenclawrox
Date: 07/31/06 12:50
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

that was really good!

Author's Response: Thank You! Your so nice. You have no idea what I went through to get here...

Reviewer: suckr4romance
Date: 07/31/06 9:07
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

Very good!

Author's Response: Thank You! Your so nice. You have no idea what I went through to get here...

Reviewer: weasleychick92
Date: 07/31/06 8:55
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

A really cool poem describing a first kiss and how everyone reacts about it!

Author's Response: Thank You! Your so nice. You have no idea what I went through to get here...

Reviewer: HarrysPhoenix
Date: 07/31/06 6:37
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

That was really nice!

Author's Response: Thank You! Your so nice. You have no idea what I went through to get here...

Reviewer: slimemonster
Date: 07/31/06 6:03
Chapter: Wonderful First Kiss

really sweet - Good luck sweetdevil!!

Author's Response: Thank You! Your so nice. You have no idea what I went through to get here...

Author's Response: Oh, I forgot, you're my first ever reviewer! Yay! Sorry, you don't get a prize. :-(

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