Reviews For The Third War
Reviewer: BehindHarrysEyes
Date: 09/22/07 21:58
Chapter: Chapter 1, The Offer

dum dum dummmmm.... lov ittt =] nice cliff hanger. =]

Reviewer: ladiibug
Date: 09/12/07 21:45
Chapter: Chapter 10, Whispering shadows

pigg latin!!

Author's Response: no. Nice idea, but no. ;-) ~Evie

Reviewer: bloodybutterflly
Date: 09/07/07 6:07
Chapter: Chapter 13, Lakeside Battle

best chapter so far.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: bloodybutterflly
Date: 09/07/07 5:49
Chapter: Chapter 10, Whispering shadows

i like how you wrote teh whispers backwards, nice chapter.

Author's Response: thnx

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 15:20
Chapter: Chapter 16, The Potion

but but but but but awwwwww now my brain hurts! =(

Author's Response: heh heh ~Evie

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 15:19
Chapter: Chapter 16, The Potion

But he but you but how but why but but but but but
AAAAAAARRRRGGGHHHHH.
*cough cough* Hum. Well. How could you? I mean it, seriously how? Tom Marvolo Riddle IS Old Mouldy Voldy so wouldn't that mean she was bringing back Old Mouldy Voldy? Oh, now my head hurts. =(

Author's Response: Yup. :D

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 15:08
Chapter: Chapter 15, The Seven

Awwww, Bella? Bella is so cool! I didn't think about it like that before, but then maybe that's because you are trying to lull us into a false sense of security and actually Bella IS bad and she wants the children to kill and why Cancer? I have lots of questions hehe.

Author's Response: you'll find out!

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 14:55
Chapter: Chapter 14, Are we safe?

Thay wasn't broing!
Ok, maybe it was but still...

Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 14:47
Chapter: Chapter 13, Lakeside Battle

You portrayed emotion PERFECTLY in this chapter. And you DON'T need a capital M for me!! Imagine that! A word that DOESN'T need a capital letter!

Author's Response: LOL! Sorry!!!! ~Evie

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 14:38
Chapter: Chapter 12, The sirens sound

Is it-
Or could it be-
Argh! You are really annoying!! Just like getting killed hehe. That was funny.

Author's Response: *is offended* :p ~Evie

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 14:31
Chapter: Chapter 11, Just a game

'Just a game'... So cliche-y but nice all the same. CAPITAL O FOR ORDER!!!!! You forgot at the top. =P


Author's Response: Sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Evie

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 14:22
Chapter: Chapter 10, Whispering shadows

Very Erised-y. 'The gate will be opened when the seven join together to fight the evil'. Absolutely funky. Funky Monkey even. Capital i for Imperio, and the same goes for Unspeakable, please!

Author's Response: Sorry! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 14:05
Chapter: Chapter 8, It begins.

I sympathise with you, mocks SUCK. Revision SUCKS. SCHOOL IN GENERAL SUCKS. But fanged cabbages, lolz. So funny. I love all your little falsh backs. They rule.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 13:55
Chapter: Chapter 7, Hogwarts on Safari.

Cool. Very cool... I can't think of nothing else to say. Everything you write is awesome. All these little its and bits. Just COOLiO

Author's Response: aw, thanks! :)

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 13:47
Chapter: Chapter 6, Remeberance

Yeah. So um... yeah. That was wicked man. Wicked wicked wickd!!! I always knew Draco was good, but he never died in my mind... How sad.

Author's Response: thnx

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 13:38
Chapter: Chapter 5, A walk through Hogsmead is often profitable...but occasionally fatal.

Spooky! And you're right, that is really dark. What did happen to Harry?

Author's Response: all will be explained in good time. ;)

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 13:26
Chapter: Chapter 4, Peeves, pranks and plans.

oooooh! I did like that bit at the end about the veil. And the way you explained about Slughorn, that was nice. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you. :D ~Evie

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 13:19
Chapter: Chapter 3, Of Hats, trains and names.

Wow! I loved all the little one-word bits of speech, it sound just like me and my brother...
I reccomend you re-read this chapter, as there quite a few of mistakes.

Author's Response: Sorry about that. :o ~Evie

Reviewer: how I live now
Date: 09/02/07 13:02
Chapter: Chapter 1, The Offer

Amazing entrance, you really got me sucked in. One thing that I always forget, and it seems that you do too, is the apostrophes. You forget to put them in quite a few times. This story sounds really good, I'm gonna read some more.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, my grammar when I first started wring this was terrible, but I'm much better now, I swear. ~Evie

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 08/21/07 21:09
Chapter: Chapter 25, New Life

Wow. I'm suprised with the ending. i did not expect. But I like it.. It's different. Great story. What is going to happen??? AHH! You have to write it ASAP! =D

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll write it as quickly as possible. ~Evie

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