Reviews For The Third War
Reviewer: lily_potter13
Date: 06/18/07 19:51
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil


Author's Response: It's gotta end some day - I've still got a fewmore chapters, though. ~Evie

Reviewer: lily_potter13
Date: 06/17/07 18:15
Chapter: Chapter 16, The Potion

omg these kids are in their 1st and maybe last year at hogwarts and thier father didnt do all of this he stop voldemort from coming back just u know u and ur story r goin into my fav's

Author's Response: whoa! Calm down!! :D Thanks! ~Evie

Reviewer: ilovebeatlesx100
Date: 06/15/07 22:30
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

oh no this is the last chapter!? it cant be NOOO!!!

Author's Response: No... we have a couple more to go yet... I don't know where you got that from... ~Evie

Reviewer: ilovebeatlesx100
Date: 06/15/07 21:49
Chapter: Chapter 16, The Potion

oh no

Author's Response: oh yes

Reviewer: AurorGirl101
Date: 06/15/07 19:07
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

Ahh! I'm so glad you got this up! Great work, and I love this fic! Sorry about the time it took! Get that next chapter over while I'm open! LOL, just kidding. You know you do a great job, and people are dying, absolutely DYING to know what happens next. UPDATE!

~Jessie, your beta, who is sorry.

Author's Response: You done such a great job with this chapter - and I'm really trying to make you proud with the next one. But, I hate writing battles, I really do struggle with them. :o ~Evie

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 06/15/07 17:06
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

No! I HATE TOM! He is soo annoying. Poor Harry and Ginny and the 7 kids. I hope they will be okay.. if they aren't I will be really mad. Btw, how will Tom stay alive forever if he can only live for 72 minutes? Make a horcrux? How horrible! You are most definitly an evil author... but you are still awesome! =D

Author's Response: awwwww! **huggles** Thank you! ~Evie

Reviewer: mrsdan
Date: 06/14/07 14:25
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

grrrr! You know I hate theser cliffies! lol. I'm almost doenwith my 2nd chapter. ha! That's a laugh. I'm ALMOST at 700 words. How pathetic can you get?

Author's Response: Lol - make sure you plan what you're going to have in your chapters, it'll be easier then. :) Thanks for the revie!! ~Evie

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 06/14/07 13:53
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

ur evil, you know that? That cliffhanger was just plain mean. I so need to read what happens next! The chapter was just as brilliant as always, i love the detail you use in them. and i'm also quite scared of the Crackacks, that would be painful... Also, a few thoughts about Grandma Lily. Maybe i'm just being paranoid, but when i read this 'But, I was in fact twenty and expecting my first child…' it makes me feel like she either ahd another child, or lost one. Am i just paranoid? Grandma Lily seems slightly bitter, then again, i would if i was in her position. I cant wait for more, please update soon :)

Author's Response: LOL. I LOVE keeping people in suspense!! Lily wanted a big family, and, yes, she's bitter because she never got the chance to have one. ~Evie

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/14/07 9:54
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

Oh Plz! This is soo corny- though that part about sirius and james was pretty kool!!!

Author's Response: ... if you're going to insult my story, can you please tell me which bits you didn't like? And how I can improve? ~Evie

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/14/07 9:44
Chapter: Chapter 19, Over on the Other Side

Plzzz! Can u get any weirder?

Author's Response: Well, I try. ~Evie

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 06/14/07 9:38
Chapter: Chapter 17, Mass Murder at the Ministry

God! I'm sorry ... but ur seriously pathetic!!! It better get better;D

Author's Response: um... any reason why? If it's so pathetic, then why have you read this far? ~Evie

Reviewer: Hilary
Date: 06/13/07 22:19
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

Ahhhh!! not another cliffie!!!! hmmm... 72 minutes, what happens then! Write as fast as you can, but not to fast as to not write a good chapter!! How much longer is this story going to go on for? 22 chapters is a long story, good job and keep up the good work

Author's Response: Hmmm... I believe I've seen this review before... ~Evie

Reviewer: Pixie Flite
Date: 06/13/07 17:36
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

seventy two minutes. Creepy. Nice job! You keep leaving me on tenderhooks!

Author's Response: Thanks!! ~Evie

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 06/13/07 17:08
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

72 minutes? What does that signify? I can't wait to find out! :) Great chapter!

Author's Response: I worked out that was Voldy's age. ;) ~Evie

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 06/13/07 15:12
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

oooh dont leave us hanging likethat witch! lol, pls update soon as its an ace story :D

Author's Response: LOL! I'm trying to write the next chappie, but I'm really terrible at battles, so you may have to wait a while. ~Evie

Reviewer: Phoenix 86
Date: 06/13/07 15:04
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

so the qestion is whether Harry can survive for 3 hours. let's wait and see. also, did you mention before that Charlie's dead? update soon.

Author's Response: um... not quite three hours, more like seventy-two minutes, which isn't even an hour and a half... Yes, I did mention that Charlie was dead, but only briefly, so you may have missed it. :) Thanks for your review! ~Evie

Reviewer: yordaman
Date: 06/13/07 14:37
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

Awsume! I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: muggler180
Date: 06/13/07 13:41
Chapter: Chapter 22, Back Through the Veil

The chapter was good.I hate the fact that Voldemort had to go back, but i still liked the chapter

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Hermione Granger 101
Date: 06/12/07 9:34
Chapter: Chapter 21, The Sweet Scents of Home?

Hi, I really like your story. I think you should know that I cannot acess the 22nd Chapter yet.

Author's Response: Yeah - that's because it hasn't been okayed by the Mods yet. Once they've decided that it's good enough to be on MNFF, then you'll be able to read it. ~Evie

Reviewer: Celtic_Jewel
Date: 06/07/07 14:46
Chapter: Chapter 21, The Sweet Scents of Home?

Sorry! I wrote more than that! :mad: I was saying, what would Elle say when she saw how cruel Bella was being?! :p


Author's Response: Hmmm... I have asneaking suspicion I've seen this before... :p ~Evie

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