Reviewer: chrislupin025
Date: 11/25/06 20:09
Chapter: One-Shot

Amazing, dearie. I loff it to pieces!

Harlot Legs McBecca.

PS- I'll be adding a new story soon =D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will be sure to check that out. >.o

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 09/02/06 16:12
Chapter: One-Shot

I thought this was so cute! I loved the extra little bits you put in there. Then thing about Sven was just hilarious.

I thought it was so funny, and there was certainly more than one point where I laughed. Seriously, the twins would have done just peachy in Slytherin. =)

The only thing I would have liked to see in an Umbridge encounter. I know you had one, but I'dve loved to see them hex her or something.

I really liked the end, when Fred came through for George. I think that's a really important part of their character, how they're always there for each other, and there would probably be a seriious problem if one died and the other didn't.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am especially overjoyed at the fact that I managed to make you laugh, and the fact that it was more than once is even better. While hexing Umbridge would have been a nice touch, I like your thinking, she probably would have given them detention and with all the problems they already have we probably shouldn't add more. ;) Many thanks for the awesome review!

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 08/11/06 15:41
Chapter: One-Shot

It was very nice of Fred to play George for the date! I can see where he would be in a hard place though. They might be very similar, but they aren't exactly the same person! hehe Thanks for the entertainment!

Author's Response: Thanks. No Fred and George aren't the same person, I always thought George was a bit more patient and quieter than Fred, hence why it might be a problem. I'm really glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 08/09/06 22:28
Chapter: One-Shot

Oh, that was very good - very funny! I laughed out loud several times - great job! You have a wonderful sense of the twins' dialogue - absolutely perfect. I like how you set the story during their seventh year, and pulled Lee Jordan and Brittany (a nice OC, by the way) into the story. You write very well - nice job with the body swap and good luck in the challenge!! ~Gina ::)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The twins are actually the easiest HP characters for me to write as I talk and act much like they do and I just put what I would do on paper and it seems to work. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Also thanks for the luck on the challenge! *crosses fingers* ~Maranda

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