Reviewer: white_doe
Date: 06/08/08 23:50
Chapter: Beginnings

Oh my gosh, such a good chapter! This story just keeps getting better, I love how in-character Snape is acting, even though it is frustrating! Please, please, please get the next chapter up quickly! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: thank you so much! and i will try to get it out soon :D

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 06/08/08 17:05
Chapter: Beginnings

Ooooo!! This one looks great! Snape being a total jerk, and Hermione having a crush on him. Of course he's being such a jerk to her that I'm surprized that she has'nt thrown something in anger at him.
I can't understand why Snape treats her the way he does, in class, when she's such a gifted student.
Perhaps because she'a gryffindor...
GReat story, I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: yay! so glad you're enjoying it! hope you like the rest :D

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 06/08/08 15:08
Chapter: Beginnings

I like it! Yes, the whole private lessons thing is a bit typical, but the way you write deffinately makes up for it. And I'm sure you'll be more creative in future chapters.

Author's Response: thank you so much, i hope you enjoy the rest of the story!!

Reviewer: Nostalgic128
Date: 06/04/08 17:43
Chapter: Beginnings

ahhh i love this story sososo much!! pleasepleasepleasetimes1000000 update soon!!!

Author's Response: new chapter's already in the queue :) thanks so much for reading! i'm glad you're enjoying it!!!

Reviewer: gred and feorge
Date: 05/31/08 17:33
Chapter: Beginnings

love the chapter tittle. lol. can't w8 to find out wot she's gna say!

Author's Response: thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lady Camelot
Date: 05/18/08 20:44
Chapter: Beginnings

YAAAAAY! The patience has paid OFF! Wow, that made my week. Just don't leave us HANGING like that again. What? Five months? But luckily for everyone, school will be out soon and your life will be hopefully (to our benefit) less busy.

Yay! I still think you're amazing, and I have faith yet, I promise!

Your Number One Fan

Author's Response: don't worry! don't worry! i promise the next update won't take NEARLY as long :D thanks so much for reading and for sticking with me -- i makes MY week that you enjoyed the chapter :D :D

Reviewer: Nostalgic128
Date: 05/18/08 19:25
Chapter: Beginnings

omgsh THANK YOU SO MUCH for updating YAYYY! it totally made my (otherwise sucky) day:D
can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: SO GLAD to hear that this chapter made your day!!!!! i love to hear that!! :D :D i'll try to get the next chapter out soon. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: tashy
Date: 05/17/08 6:28
Chapter: Beginnings

i was extremely impressed by this story!!!
at first i thought it was a little farfetched but then...WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it became so brilliant!!!it improved so dramatically that i can ony say that u are an extremely talented author!i can't wait for ur next chapter.after all this action i hope for a lot more fluffiness(between sev and hermione8-))
cant wait for it!update soon!

Author's Response: aw thanks so much! and i'm glad to hear that it improves because that means that i improved too :D and don't worry, the fluff is on the way...

Reviewer: Lady Camelot
Date: 05/04/08 22:20
Chapter: Beginnings

Don't let the impatient get ya down! I have faith yet!

Can't wait for the smashing new chapter!

Author's Response: Haha aw, thanks! And don't worry, no one is getting me down -- I'm flattered by the impatience! I just wish I could update faster, because I know how frustrating it is xD

Reviewer: Nohope118
Date: 04/04/08 22:05
Chapter: Beginnings

I am dying here!Its been like four months since you have updated,and I have been checking back at least every day.I'm starting to give up hope.=[

Author's Response: Pleeeeease don't give up hope! I know it's been forever, and I know it's frustrating -- I just ask all of you wonderful readers to be patient just a little longer. My life has been insane with school work and job hunting and sorority stuff and cheerleading stuff and setting up courses for next year and so much reading my eyes continually feel crossed xD Once again, I am so so sorry, and thank you so much for all the patience you have shown so far. Just a little longer, I promise. I have not given up! That gosh dern chapter will be finished if it's the last thing i do :)

Reviewer: Lady Camelot
Date: 02/08/08 21:12
Chapter: Beginnings


Out of, ummm, pure curiosity (and not because I'm dying with nothing new to read...)

How is chapter 20 coming? Half-way there? Almost done? God forbid- not very far?

Author's Response: I am sorry and ashamed to report that chapter twenty is not coming along quite as well as I had hoped. Besides the cosmos of fate deciding to give my life a nasty little spin for the past few weeks, this chapter has been proving very difficult to navigate. I have about 1,500 words so far (3 and 1/2 pages) -- so still a ways to go yet. I'm sorry for the wait, and thanks so much for hanging in there! :)

Reviewer: Nohope118
Date: 01/27/08 20:00
Chapter: Beginnings

More hermione&snape time!They've only had one big special moment,and two moments that were disrupted!This is not making me very happy =(

Author's Response: Ah! I'm sorry the lack of hermione&snape time is making you unhappy,but not to worry!As this is a romance,and I'm generally not a mean person,I do expect they will get together in the end =)

Reviewer: Lady Camelot
Date: 01/10/08 9:27
Chapter: Beginnings

Has this category been affected by the hackers, or have there just been no updates? If it has you'll really have to post the chapter 19 somewhere else, or my patience will run out. :] How's the next chapter coming along anyway?

Author's Response: please don't lose patience! i know it's taking a while, but i'm trying my best to get the new chapter out as soon as i can. right now i'm at about 3500 words, so maybe a little under half-way through. bear with me please, and thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: biggest hp fan
Date: 01/04/08 13:50
Chapter: Beginnings

updateeeee!!!dying of thrill here!!!hermione CAN'T die!!!

Author's Response: the new chapter is on its way i promise :D :D

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/01/08 0:12
Chapter: Beginnings

Okay, How could Hermione work with a teacher, who hates her so much...She must have nerves of steel to work in Snape's dungeons, and to put up with his insults.
Great story, it'll be interesting to see how this all pans out.

Author's Response: glad to hear it :D

Reviewer: ada22
Date: 12/09/07 11:04
Chapter: Beginnings

Thanks very much! How do I send it to you? What's your e-mail adress?

Author's Response: you can send me a private message from my profile page :)

Reviewer: ada22
Date: 12/08/07 16:05
Chapter: Beginnings

OK, this is rather funny. On the 19th of October 2007 I was reading my first fanfiction ever which happened to be this one. I had only read HP and the HBP and HP and the DH at that moment. Guess what, the world of Harry Potter "engulfed" me so rapidly that I only two months later I am writing a HP fanfic myself (I've only written original work until now). I'm already 60 pages through it and since you are author of the first fanfic I ever read, I was wondering if you would make me the honor of being the first to read it and review it? If you like it I might think about posting it. So, what do you say?
By the way, how’s chapter 18 coming up?

Author's Response: i would love to :D go ahead and send it to me. though, it may be a while before i can get back to you because finals are coming up, and i am insanely busy. but i will do my best :D :D

Reviewer: jrengelbrecht
Date: 12/05/07 10:51
Chapter: Beginnings

Well I keep up with your reviews, so if you mention it in your comments, that's good enough for me. I don't really know how all that works, so no real suggestions on how to get the word out for everyone. As always, keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: thanks so much!! and i will be sure to leave notice when i update :)

Reviewer: jrengelbrecht
Date: 12/02/07 22:04
Chapter: Beginnings

Will you let us know if you change things around? I'd always love to read the revisions.

Author's Response: i would love to let you guys know! i revise so often, and a lot of times, i change a good chunk of what has already been posted. do you know of any way where i can actually let people know? thanks for the suggestion. and OH, i just posted a newly revised chapter 15 :D :D after looking it over, i really wasn't happy with Snape's reaction, so i tweaked a whole bunch of lines, and i think it flows a little better now--as well as keeping IC. once again, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: juliep63
Date: 12/01/07 23:00
Chapter: Beginnings

please update this story asap... i've fallen obsessively in love with it

Author's Response: aw, yay for obessiveness xD glad you're enjoying it! and i really will try to update as soon as i can!!

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